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we say our good byes we kiss our good nights. every day we rise even through fights. and though its not final this one thing is true you are an angel and i'll always love you



thinking of you
Everyday your in my head, and I wish you hadn't left, you meant so much to me why coulnt it last. Even after youd gone i couldnt let you leave my life is dark... i just want you to know that maybe i was wrong , you were always right. If you take me back i will sleep tonight. please dont make me dissapear dont shun me from your sight I hope that one night we will end this all and be happy once again. one night to mend and saturday i will be yours. Summer should stay winter is unneeded. please i have been defeated. i cant go a day without thinking your name distance doesnt matter it is but a game. love is a virtue and virtues mame. please think of me when your sitting in the sun, shed a tear when your having all your fun. ive missed you all these months. we havent spoken in so long

2006-11-04 06:33:46 · 2 answers · asked by shimbals 2 in Arts & Humanities Philosophy

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good job

2006-11-04 06:57:07 · answer #1 · answered by amberharris20022000 7 · 0 0

Nope. Sorry. There's much more to poetry than whining and rhyming. The first one would go great on a homemade anniversary card or something though.

2006-11-06 22:46:24 · answer #2 · answered by Jacob H 1 · 0 0

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