Your Wishes are Your Own"
(V1)
Don't tell your wishes- Just keep them to your self
they don't come true if you tell someone
It is just what you got to to
No turning back after one peep
Life is full of dreams when you are asleep
(chorus)
Wishes Wishes and More Wishes
Your wishes are your own
Wishes wishes and more wishes
you can't tell anyone
life has all turns and corners
that we have to get through
but all along
This wish i can't tell you
(V2)
I can't tell anyone especially you!
Cuz if i do you will spread it
Not soo good for meee
My wishes are my own i can't tell you
or it won't come true
(bridge)
When you are asleep you dream away- when you make your wishes - normally on a birthday cake- can't tell anyone- just make it your own- Cause your Wishes are your OWN.......
(Chorus)
Wishes Wishes and More Wishes
Your wishes are your own
Wishes wishes and more wishes
you can't tell anyone
life has all turns and corners
that we have to get through
but all along
2006-11-04 06:10:10 · 15 answers · asked by ♥Layna♥ 3 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
this wish i can't tell you
(the end- sorry i couldn't finish it but i ran out of room)
2006-11-04 06:10:48 · update #1
Please be nice- this was one of my favorite songs that i can sing, and play Guitar with. I play in a band and this is the song that we play most
2006-11-04 06:15:11 · update #2
i did finsh it it was just hard to tell because ... Didn't you see the THE END
2006-11-04 06:16:22 · update #3
I liked it a lot! Have you ever heard of "Lisa Loeb", or heard any of her songs? I think you would like her, she writes your style of music. Anyway, I liked the song a lot, but it was kinda hard to judge because I don't know the tune of it! But, I thouht the lyics were beautiful and well thought out. Best of luck with your band!
2006-11-04 06:30:01 · answer #1 · answered by Popsicle 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
If it is a nation or folks tune, it is a winner. One factor I'd advocate is that you just lose the paragraph constitution. Make it appear like verses, and do not be afraid to copy key terms within the refrain: a unmarried mother i paintings a nine to five i obtained a lovely daughter with a few hazel eyes and whilst she smiles it lighting fixtures up the complete room however there's a piece of her middle that she is missin
2016-09-01 07:07:47 · answer #2 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Every picture tells a story?
(rod stewart)
It's pretty OK...
You have the story, would love to hear the music.
2006-11-04 06:38:47 · answer #3 · answered by MsElainious 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its pretty good. no award winner that's for sure but for a beginner i'd say its ok. its better than some songs on the radio... keep writing cause i'm sure you'll get better as you go.
2006-11-04 06:19:38 · answer #4 · answered by fukuoka 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I admire your effort and encourage you to keep writing.....
I am just not a fan of songs where it is obvious you tried hard to make everything rhyme, but it is not horribly horrible.
2006-11-04 06:15:03 · answer #5 · answered by wordharpy 2 · 1⤊ 1⤋
I like it, but hon, watch posting your own material on the net, some could take it and claim it as their own.
2006-11-04 06:28:04 · answer #6 · answered by GirlsRGamers2 7 · 1⤊ 1⤋
Um. I think I have become dumber for having read this. In case you don't know what that means, it means I don't like it.
2006-11-04 06:15:25 · answer #7 · answered by Genevieve 3 · 1⤊ 1⤋
it's cool darlin,am waitin for u to send the rest,i really liked it
2006-11-04 06:14:49 · answer #8 · answered by Tara 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
i think that it would sound cute with a really good beat to it
2006-11-04 06:23:27 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
song without tune is like the sky with out stars.
no one knows how deep it goes until something shines in the distance
I like it
good luck with it
2006-11-04 06:16:12 · answer #10 · answered by -)-(- 6 · 1⤊ 3⤋