I was going to write it in a card for my mother for her birthday...
let me know what you think! Thanks!
Here I sit in misty vapour
in a sh*thouse with no paper
I have no time to sit and linger
watch out ***hole here comes the finger.
2006-11-04 02:56:02 · 14 answers · asked by ? 6 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
aha,lol.good one.i guess your mom will love the poem,go for it!
2006-11-04 03:09:10 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
I don't think its very nice to give to your mother. how about something a little more loving?
or maybe something like this.
Here I sit thinking of you,
the mother who's had so much to do,
you have no time to sit and linger,
because of that dammed ring dad put on your finger.
happy birthday mom ect..
here's whishing you some relaxing time.
ya ya, it's corny . but its my first ever ryme. never did a poem before. but I think it is less rude.
2006-11-04 12:30:33 · answer #2 · answered by anotherpainintheazz 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
This fits the mother-in-law birthday card that you have to get.
2006-11-04 11:08:15 · answer #3 · answered by Dottie 6 · 2⤊ 0⤋
it is a lovely card she will love it but what about the picture you forgot to tell us what illustration, you are going to put on the cover of the card
2006-11-04 19:27:46 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
no not for the mom mabey a friend try
roses are red
violets are blue
it's your birthday
so happy bithday to you
2006-11-04 11:02:03 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
umm i dont think it would be for a mom unless you dont like her at all i mean thats what i get out of it
2006-11-04 11:08:00 · answer #6 · answered by DiP13sK01 2 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Can I borrow that to put in my x-mas cards?
2006-11-04 11:02:24 · answer #7 · answered by Jade 3 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Taco terrific man...
2006-11-04 11:26:53 · answer #8 · answered by bobemac 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Um..ok I'm sure your mum would appreciate that.....if she was a minger . eeewwwwwwwww
2006-11-04 10:58:38 · answer #9 · answered by Welsh Gem* 4 · 2⤊ 0⤋
If your Mom has a sense of humor.....then yes. lol
2006-11-04 11:32:39 · answer #10 · answered by dyingatwork 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋