this is a poem I wrote... plz critique it, but dont say something like "i dont care" or something plz
There is always someone
Special in everyones life
No tht the boyfriend
Or the girlfriend
Not the husband
Or the wife,
But someone who has
Always been there
Through thick
And thin
That special person
Is your best friend
They never let you down
They never give up
Even if your being a brat
A boylover
Or just plain shallow
They take one look and
Know something’s wrong
Even if you have the biggest smile
They take another look
And know u like some one
Just one more look
And they know that you just need to talk
2006-11-03 10:05:11 · 9 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Friends
its ok....
2006-11-04 10:36:07 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Well, I am not much of a critic, or that fancy with poems. I mean that doesn't sound like a proffesional did it, but it doesn't sound like someone with no experiance did it either. I would say you are half- way there, keep working!
2006-11-03 18:09:42 · answer #2 · answered by peace ♥ music 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
This is possibly the most unoriginal poem I've ever read, it's terribly cliche.
2006-11-03 20:45:30 · answer #3 · answered by Susie 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very nice. Would make a good song lyric.
2006-11-03 18:10:08 · answer #4 · answered by langdonrjones 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
yes it's all true, i understand exactly what you mean. it's a good poem.
2006-11-03 18:08:40 · answer #5 · answered by Hayla 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Very nice...good job.
2006-11-03 18:10:33 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
ooooh that's awesome, a few spelling errors, but otherwise, AWESOME!
2006-11-03 20:26:08 · answer #7 · answered by bekki 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
THAT IS SO AWESOME
I WOULD SO PUBLISH IT
DAMN GIRL THAT REALLY TOUCHED MY HEART.
THANX YOU SILLY GOOSE.
2006-11-03 18:10:30 · answer #8 · answered by CUTIE BATOOTIE 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
N.I.C.E...
2006-11-03 18:08:31 · answer #9 · answered by bäwЄŁ Ļoĕ ® 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋