i wrote this poem, and it makes sense to me, biut i would like to know what it means to others, what's your perspective on it, what does it mean to you?
And Tomorrow Was It All…
When promised and lost
When truth be told
How far we will go to feel
The emptiness strengthen
In his hands that once held
The pain of the year
And times we have not forgotten
The words he said shall live on
And tomorrow was it all
Whether it be the kiss or the question
That lived on and loved all
The sign of the friendship and start to the fall
The storm and the seas
The tears and the way he was there for the call
The shine in his eye, the trip that we took
To see the light that bore before us
With the strength and the height
That grew to amaze us
It’s now the growth and the love we all share
It’s now the pain we think is absurd
But remember we couldn’t bear
To abide what we scorned
Amid the clouds that showed the rain
But tomorrow was it all, the light that blinded us day by day
For tomorrow is new
With a favor of change
Once immature you would say
Now you see how far
He has come to play
The cellos that were once so small
So don’t stand in the rain my dear
It’s not worth catching cold
It’s not worth to deafen your ears
From the drops dipped in gold
With the tear of the night
Sounding off as you walk past yesterday
And tomorrow was it all…
2006-11-02 11:47:12 · 13 answers · asked by fuzzy19 3 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
it has nothing to do with a cello specificly, and it is not biblical...
2006-11-02 12:35:06 · update #1
It made me cry, it is beautiful, hope you don't mind , but I e-mailed it to a couple dear friends, you have either known a heartache and or lost someone close to you, or that person you love, witnessed them in pain at there loss-bless you talent and your spirit
2006-11-02 11:56:42 · answer #1 · answered by ? 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I can't be certain if this is some sort of biblical ode or just some ode to a lost musician but it is good, just a little vague as to your relationship to "him". And if it is biblical the Him should be capitalized. And cello is specific so it should have had something to do with a person who played a cello regardless.
2006-11-02 20:21:29 · answer #2 · answered by LORD Z 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
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2006-11-02 19:49:46 · answer #3 · answered by I am 14 And In the 8th grade! 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Must only make sense to you. I'm an English teacher with two degrees and would give you a pass.
2006-11-02 19:50:40 · answer #4 · answered by Lydia 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
To me it's pretty but with something omitted. I can't pin point what it is other then the point of it's meaning. What is it that I am missing?
2006-11-02 19:59:45 · answer #5 · answered by AL 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i cant name something specific that its about or anything like that, but i definitely feel its vibe
i dont think there really is a right or wrong interpretation, but to me it sounds like something hopeful and optimistic.
i like it alright as far as poems go
2006-11-02 19:56:43 · answer #6 · answered by kitty is ANGRY!™ 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it
2006-11-02 19:48:55 · answer #7 · answered by justmejimw 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
yes. to me it says to get lost in love while you have it and cherish it forever.
2006-11-02 20:06:14 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
very deep i get it lost love
2006-11-02 19:50:19 · answer #9 · answered by earthygirl 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its pretty good :)its ok if other people dont get it aslong as you do
2006-11-02 19:50:56 · answer #10 · answered by ali 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋