Would you be interested in a story about a twelve year old girl who runs away from her home with her sisters, aged 2 and 0, and goes to Calfiornia by train with her own money because her mom abuses them? Then she finds a boy named Blaze, who she thinks is really cute and Blaze lets her and her sisters stay with him (he is the same age as the girl, Molly.) Blaze and Molly end up getting married at the age of fourteen. Then Molly gets pregnant and has a baby at fifteen. Now Molly and Blaze takes Molly's mom to court to get Molly's younger sisters, now 3 and 5, back. What do you think? I am still working on it and I am thinking about publishing it...oh yeah, then Molly gets famous for singing and they end up rich...but yeah...I am still working on it. There is a lot more to the story than that, though. If you don't like those kind of stories, than what kind of a book would you be interested in?
*By the way, if you haven't guessed, I like to write stories. Lol!
2006-11-02 11:19:56 · 15 answers · asked by Anonymous in Pregnancy & Parenting ➔ Adolescent
The mom is abusing the kids because she thinks it is their fault that their dad died and she is an alcoholic and prostitute...sorry i didn't add that in my question!
2006-11-02 11:29:27 · update #1
Blaze lives with his parents...if that makes more sense.
2006-11-02 11:35:36 · update #2
It sounds a little bit...unrealistic, but I think it has potential.
Publish it on fictionpress first (if you need a link, IM me.) and see how it does.
I, personally, am a historical fiction person, and I will be a history major soon, so obviously, this just isn't my taste. I do, however, know of a ton of people who would love this and eat it up like halloween candy. I only say that because I'm chewing on a funsize Butterfinger right now. heehee.
Have fun writing it and I'm sure it'll turn out great. One thing that you might want to think about to give it a more down-to-earth feeling and therefore make it appeal to more people-change Blaze's name to something less...odd...so that he doesn't seem too fanciful. I dunno, my taste, I guess, is for realistics, so take it or leave it.
Happy Writing!!!
2006-11-02 15:21:41 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
Well, since she's going to California, I'm assuming she's in the U.S. It's illegal to get married if you're under the age of 17 without parent conscent here. Also, I don't think a 12 year old girl could take care of a very young baby, or that normal parents would let some random girls come to live with their son, and marry him.
It sounds kind of interesting, but it's very unrealistic.
2006-11-02 20:41:45 · answer #2 · answered by Supernova 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sorry, but as intresting as it sounds, i probably would pick it up, look at the cover, if it was intresting on the cover , flip it , read the summary and put it down, its not that its not intresting, because believe me it is!, but its so unrealistic, and plus im into books about teens, concerning that im one myself, so the whole idea that shes 12 would immedialty make me put it back, thier my book maniaic reflexes, i love to read so much that i can tll if its something i like just by the cover, if its orginal and nicley done then i read the summary, if not i usually dont even bether, yes i no i no , dont judge a book by its cover, but for someone who reads as much as i do i no what my style is and can tell by the cover about80% of the time if its something that id concerder reading, so over all if it had a goog cover id consider-read the summary and put it down, its not my style of reading material, i no many will love it though so keep writing, and dont let bothersom people like myself who are picky readers discourage you!
2006-11-02 19:31:24 · answer #3 · answered by Bridgette ♥ 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I would bump the age of the girl up to running away at 14 getting married at 20. Or leave the age unmentioned, because the whole married at 14 seems..... a little creepy. But the whole story seems pretty awesome. If you think my advice is wrong just ask someone closer to you then me.
2006-11-02 20:51:23 · answer #4 · answered by Victoria W 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
yea it sounds good... and I love the name blaze!
you should add in how molly isnt completely comfortable with living w/ blaze's parents, but they love having her(&their family) there. that would be cool...
so umm... let me know how it goes. send me a message or something
2006-11-02 21:01:51 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I am 10 and i would absolutly LOVE to read that book. The only thing i dont like is the singing. What will the book be called, beacause if u do publish it ill be the first one to buy it!!!
GOOD LUCK!!!
2006-11-04 13:59:26 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I would be interested in hearing more of that story. I hope that you come up with a title and get it published, because I would like to know what happens.
2006-11-02 19:24:29 · answer #7 · answered by southern_angel_200718 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You're awesome because you like to write stories. I love writing them. Have at least four of five longs one. And yea I would be interested in a story like that! Keep writing. That's so awesome!
2006-11-02 19:40:24 · answer #8 · answered by K 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Yeah, that sounds like a really interesting story. You have one really good imagination!! Go for it!!!
2006-11-02 20:40:09 · answer #9 · answered by Crystal 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That sounds awesome! Go for it! I love to write too! The more you write, the more you'll want to write. It sounds awesome, really! I'd love to read it!! Email me!!!
2006-11-02 19:24:04 · answer #10 · answered by misskenjr 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋