I like him so; but there is one thing he does no know. I'm going out with him; But the chances are slim. Because without him; He's sitting on the rim. May fall in; may fall out; do you know what this is all about? I like you too; But theres another person i do! I will take the leap, I may trip and fall; but that's not as bad as not trying at all. I will get up, Life will go on; Out comes a answer killing like a bomb. My heart is Crushed, but soon it will heal; Here's the deal. I have my Friends and family around me that will help me; because to end this heartach they are the key. I always remember the line my friends use on me;'Girl there are always more fish in the sea.' I hug them and say thanks; scince he killed me like a little fish in a big shark tank. they say no problem girl!' 'you are the most importent to me in the world!'
Tell me what you think!!
2006-11-02 10:20:51 · 9 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Friends
Girl if you turn this in and call it a poem, you better expect a grade of "F". This is not a poem. This looks like some kind of spaced out "rap" , something that got kicked out of the stars.
2006-11-02 10:25:27 · answer #1 · answered by Rooster 1972 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I just like the thought, however there are lots of misspellings. Also, "textspeak" does not hassle me whilst it is used to save lots of money and time, however in poetry, you must spell out the entire phrases and likewise determine the spelling of the whole poem earlier than you post it. You are surely an overly touchy individual.
2016-09-01 06:17:01 · answer #2 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Ahhhhhh very good.I liked it....My son does poems too and u seem to be like him,You both have a gift of gab. Keep it up
2006-11-02 10:32:50 · answer #3 · answered by sweet_thing_kay04 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i lov ethis poem it says a lot about u and how u feel.
2006-11-02 10:31:14 · answer #4 · answered by baby gurl 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
OMG!! u hv talent. its so nice n touching!
2006-11-02 10:26:31 · answer #5 · answered by !♥~FaY9512~♥! 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
keep working on it
2006-11-02 10:27:36 · answer #6 · answered by Cobra 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I THINK THATS AWESOME
2006-11-02 10:29:27 · answer #7 · answered by donielle 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
THATS AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!try publishing it =)
2006-11-02 10:26:20 · answer #8 · answered by Worldemperor 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
very clever.
2006-11-02 10:32:10 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋