Haiku poems are usually about nature, which is why the assignment was given. Poetry.com has a haiku section where you can make a poem from the words given and submit it to win a prize. It's pretty easy.
No, the poem doesn't always rhyme, but it says something powerful. Notice in your oem that it is a "bitter morning" and the sparrows are sitting "together" and "without any necks." Can you feel how the birds are so cold that they sit close and bury their heads in their feathers to keep warm?
I'll give you an idea ... and you can think about what to write. The other day I was driving into a city from my tiny country community. I saw a hawk perched on a fence post. At first I thought it was a statue, until he turned his head. He appeared stately in his fashion, uncaring about the world passing by. He turned his head to look at me and seemed very bored. I thought about stopping to take a picture, but was afraid he would just fly away. So I went on my way and left him to do what stately hawks do in the afternoon.
You might think of that image and try to write something on it if you wish.
Good Luck!
Sue
2006-11-02 09:38:04
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answer #1
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answered by newbiegranny 5
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Pining in the rain
Blustery drizzle and sleet.
Chill wind says "alone".
Twenty two degrees
Miles from Tokyo soba shop
Ice on whisper pond.
Damp green moss like sponge.
Soaking up my troubled mind
Blooms return in peace.
All alone I sit
Shamed because I stole the verse
Never having tried.
Here are some examples for you.
But give it a go. You can write haiku too.
Write down a list of all the nature and weather words you can think of, then string them together in a haiku thought.
It's like a puzzle.
You can do it.
2006-11-02 10:47:17
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answer #2
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answered by True Blue 6
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Silly little girl
Can not do her own homework
So she goes online
I am in a great mood so why not. I'll do your homeowrk for you:
Roses that are red
Show your spuse that you love her
Yellow is for friends
As the thunder rolls
And lighting fills the whole sky
I feel oh so scared
The beautiful deer
Startes drinking next to the lake
the hunter takes aim
2006-11-02 10:00:31
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answer #3
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answered by Liz 3
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I study this two times. the way you layer longer tale-appropriate prose is admirable, and a few thing I also have a lot hardship with. you're making it look straightforward, organic, yet all persons who write know the choice is genuine. I oftentimes degree the effectiveness of somewhat by capacity of the type of TD's........Jealousy rears it incredibly is eco-friendly head. Kudos to you, Mr Carney.
2016-10-21 04:09:03
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answer #4
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answered by ? 4
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A little bunny
Searching for the soft green grass
Eating, Eating, GO!
My daughter done this last year in 5th grade. You really should do your own homework though.
2006-11-02 09:31:25
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answer #5
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answered by sweet.pjs1 5
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too had that he's dead
he really was with nature
we will miss him now
you should do your work
nobody likes you right now
too bad you are dumb
i am tired of this
you should go to bed right now
let the people sleep
2006-11-02 09:31:09
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answer #6
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answered by holyitsacar 4
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The lightning strikes the man
his flesh is fried and crispy
he is quite tasty
2006-11-02 09:27:57
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answer #7
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answered by Anonymous
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Billowing grey clouds
Shapes appear and disapper
With no beginning or end
2006-11-02 09:34:53
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answer #8
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answered by Anonymous
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the gorilla walks
swiftly through the springtime rain
his junk is floppy
2006-11-02 09:29:19
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answer #9
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answered by Anonymous
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the eagle soars high
in a solo quest for food
do your own homework
2006-11-02 09:29:00
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answer #10
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answered by bodinibold 7
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