can some one help me for personifications in a story ?more information inside?

Question

the story is about a 16 yr old boy who takes part in under 18 horse championship and it sarts from were he wokes up in bedroom he goes and makes his horse bath , then he takes bath , he ran downstairs he was suprise seeing all his relative and freinds . his fathe bright him a new racing kit and then he goes to stadium.........
NOW I WANT TO ADD SIMILE METAPHOR AND PERSONIFICATION IN THIS STORY PLEASE TELL ME WHICH once CAN I USE

Answer 1

Personification- The horses eyes glinted with excitement, his arms strong and tough. A burning ambition grew in his heart he had to win this race for the boy.

Metaphor- The stadium is the projection of all his fears and goals

Similie- The water glittered like a million tiny stars

or something like that

basically

personification - give human attributes

metaphor - dont use like use is

simile- use like

Answer 2

You must first understand what simile, metaphor and personification are.

Similie: Saying something is like something else. "The water on the lake shined LIKE a mirror in the moonlight."

Metaphor: Not literally, but reflects the MEANING of somethng else. "His hand was lightening striking my face." Someone's hand is not literal lightening. Do you see the metaphor?

Personification: Applying human attributes to something that is not human. Animals talking is a simple example. Also, something like: "The branches of the tree were spread out in anger, wanting to strike the woodchopper as he struck with his ax."

Do the tree branches really have angry feelings? No. But this is personification used to describe the seen in a more powerful way.

Now, take your story and assignment, use your imagination, be creative, and I know you will come up with something.

Good Luck!

Sue

Answer 3

Simile- comparing one thing to another using Like or As
Metaphor- comparing one thing to another without using like or as
Personification- giving an inanimate object human or animal characteristics

For example: The competing horses charged like bulls (Simile)
A sea of faces filled the stadium grounds(Metaphor)
We were slowing down rapidly, grass grabbing tightly onto my ankles. (Personification)

Answer 4

in stead of saying he ran downstairs u can say he ran as fast as a cheetah down the stairs and when he got to the bottom he was suprised seeing all of his relatives and friends.

Answer 5

you can use any or all of these here...the smell of the stadium was like standing in a leather factory.... etc.