I am the cause of deaths and wars,
Men are posessed by me.
Without me the world would be a better place,
Yet for me you'd give your life.
And each time good is done in this world,
I'm worshipped, honoured and praised.
But my sins are never blamed on me,
But blamed on another fantasy creature.
You follow me and believe in me,
It could be a fatal mistake.
Ignore me and look at me as nothing,
Then nothing I shall be.
I have told you all my dangers,
Now you all must decide.
If I am nothing, just a myth,
Or if I am your life, your God.
2006-11-02 03:07:24 · 12 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
Alright dude,
It's good but NOT good enough to be a man who writes poetry for a living, seen better
But still good
=P
2006-11-02 03:09:49 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
No real meter or rhythm, obviously no rhyme structure. Rather bland and inartistic in execution. Pretty sophomoric really. I'd give it a 4/10. Hey, you asked.
2006-11-02 11:10:54 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
It is ok but I am not trying to sarcastic or harsh but i would not quite my job to be a poet
2006-11-02 16:46:41 · answer #3 · answered by Cherry Berry 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
the idea is very nice and unique
i really liked the thought more than the layout
but good job
2006-11-02 11:39:54 · answer #4 · answered by going-to-light 3 · 1⤊ 1⤋
The idea is good....but the architect should be shot.
2006-11-02 11:17:12 · answer #5 · answered by mmd 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
so what is the name of your poem?the god of evil?
2006-11-02 11:11:37 · answer #6 · answered by cc 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Yes....I really like it...it suits everyone too...nice one
2006-11-02 11:09:38 · answer #7 · answered by minitheminx65 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋
very ,very nice.i enjoyed the poem.
2006-11-02 11:40:35 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
i wish i was as good as you, i do try
2006-11-06 03:49:26 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
not bad
2006-11-02 11:16:22 · answer #10 · answered by monkay78 2 · 1⤊ 1⤋