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"Her come the Aussies
And Cricket is their game
They'e all together
And winning is their aim
They'll play on through the Summer rain
And bring The Ashes back again"

2006-11-01 20:19:37 · 10 answers · asked by jb1 4 in Sports Cricket

10 answers

yes i like it
well done my friend
not only will they win the ashes they are only 1 win away in India as well

2006-11-01 22:03:40 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1 0

Hi,

Nopes i think they need to keep the momentum going on & they should be down to earth every time they play especially if the target to regain Ashes.

They should never underestimate England. Kevin is on fire Additional Freddy is back. They might blow up the Ausies...

But along with that i have to accept Ausies Supremacy over cricket no doubt. But now days they are also going through some bad phase. Ausies has never lost most number of matches in this year if you compare in last 7 years.

3 times they couldn't defend total over 300. They have lost the Ashes... so there is lot to think about. I hope that my points are valid.

Regards,
Santosh

2006-11-02 06:33:40 · answer #2 · answered by Santosh Kumar 2 · 0 0

i'd say it is a good beginning. you need to work on it a little more and read it out loud to help you change it and perfect it. i find the second last line to be too long. other wise good. good luck. i also write poetry occasionally. =)

2006-11-02 04:30:06 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

Aussie! Aussie !Aussie! Oi Oi Oi !!
What a great poem!!
you should give it to the Media or something like that!!

2006-11-02 04:39:27 · answer #4 · answered by ausblue 7 · 0 0

Great. You have a good scope to become a poet. Keep trying. Good luck.

2006-11-02 05:39:14 · answer #5 · answered by vakayil k 7 · 0 0

True And Nice

2006-11-02 05:49:49 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

Yeah!! Go Aussies!!!

2006-11-02 04:28:13 · answer #7 · answered by Sammee 3 · 1 0

It's great yeh but AFL is a better sport to write about!!!!
No da

2006-11-02 04:37:43 · answer #8 · answered by jus_707 2 · 0 1

Er, don't give up your day job.

2006-11-02 04:21:48 · answer #9 · answered by TonyB 6 · 1 0

ooooooooooutstanding!!!!!!!!!!!!! , eeeeeeeeeexcellent!!!!!!!!!!!
ggggggggggreat!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Could'nt think of anything else quickly..................

2006-11-02 05:44:52 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0 1

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