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For example:
I dream about butterflies every night.
Because they are so bright
They will always be in my sight.

Up in the sky, Butterflies are flying
I feel like dancing
And I could not stop laughing.

2006-11-01 16:22:31 · 5 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference Words & Wordplay

5 answers

I think you want a triplet with each line rhyming with butterfly. Your poor examples don't satisfy what you want. The first stanza is 3 lines that rhyme in a poem about butterflies and the second neither rhymes nor is about butterflies. Its about your feelings.

Triplets should not only have 3 lines that rhyme, but also 3 lines that have the same meter or # of syllables.

wat_more, above, is close.


Up, high in the sky,
Look! A butterfly.
There it goes...good-bye.

2006-11-01 17:59:28 · answer #1 · answered by tichur 7 · 0 0

I like to look at butterflies
when the caterpillar dies
tears fall from my eyes

2006-11-02 00:30:21 · answer #2 · answered by Agnon L 5 · 0 0

yours doesn't ryme with butterfly... ???

flower to butterfly:

oh little butterfly,
fluttering in the sky,
thank you for dropping by!

2006-11-02 01:04:40 · answer #3 · answered by wat_more_can_i_say? 6 · 1 0

orange you gonna rhyme your example with butterfly ?

2006-11-02 00:28:53 · answer #4 · answered by dogpatch USA 7 · 0 0

I think I could try to do it!

2006-11-02 00:32:50 · answer #5 · answered by ••Mott•• 6 · 0 0

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