Okay another song i wrote...i think its okay but this is the first song i ever wrote without rhyming it in the verses, but everyone here tells me to stop rhyming for once so i tried it...is it good??
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[verse 1]
It's Not The Way You Look At Me
It's The Way You Present Yourself
I've Never Seen This Side Of You
Please Stop Your Faking Now
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[verse 2]
Dream Of A Better Day
Coming Around The Corner
Just Maybe, You'd Need This
To Help You From Your Fall
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[chorus]
I Love You
But You Don't Love Me Back
I Hate You
Hate's Not Something You Lack
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And Here I Am Again...
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[
verse 3]
I'm Drunk Off Your Kiss
Now This Needs To Stop
But Will You Hold My Hand?
Once More Before I Leave?
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[verse 4]
I Didn't Mean To Start This
But I Died Over Your Kiss
You Stole Something I Need Back
Won't You Give My Heart Back?
[chorus again]
2006-11-01 11:11:28 · 3 answers · asked by Kelsey's Mommy<3 4 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
Wow that's great!
I like the line I'M DRUNK OFF YOUR KISS
hmmmm...great job!:)
2006-11-01 11:18:35 · answer #1 · answered by honeymay 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
those are some pretty good lyrics just throw in some music and you should have a pretty good song
2006-11-01 19:19:56 · answer #2 · answered by wookie 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
that's not a song. that's a poem.
2006-11-01 22:02:20 · answer #3 · answered by ƎIΝΟƆ 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋