Any opinions on this??? Im not done yet but just asking if you think it's good or bad...
[chorus]
I Love You
But You Don't Love Me Back
I Hate You
Hate's Not Something You Lack
[verse]
Cry In Pain Over You
Fake A Smile And You Won't Know
Oh If You Only Knew
I Was Just A Game You Show
thats all i have and no i dont know what type of music it would be if its a song...it would probably be a rock type song...so yeah..
2006-11-01 10:35:20 · 9 answers · asked by Kelsey's Mommy<3 4 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
it's very good, u obviously have talent and it shows in this. it really sends out a message and makes u think. it's very good, i really like it. i write too, maybe we could trade sometime.
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2006-11-01 10:54:01 · answer #1 · answered by ♥#1 Miley Cyrus Fan♥ 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I'm not so much concerned with the random person who pops up and throws in their non relevant opinion or copies and pastes from one of the many "why the bible is against Wicca" websites. Everyone else TD's them and no one reads that tripe. What I am concerned with is people who actually make threats. Those are the people I will block and fast. I can handle being disagreed with, but if someone is actually making threats or being abusive in some way that's completely different. But, I have no problem with blocking people who repeatedly pop in to just be argumentative, especially when they don't even answer the question. If they are just doing a copy and paste or answering every question with the word "Wicca" or "Pagan" in it the exact same way then they aren't a valid community member - they are a troll and deserve to be blocked. They bring nothing to discussion. That's my opinion.
2016-05-23 07:05:38 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I love the chorus but pardon my stupidity, I dont get the last line of the verse. But I think It's coming along really well. It's got a backround most of us can relate to. Keep going and you'll be onto something.
ps: I REALLY like the chorus.
2006-11-01 10:41:58 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
since i'm an expert at this i wrote some lines that will make it better
chorus]
I Love You
But You Don't Love Me Back
You Hate You
Hate's Not Something You Lack
I think your a snake
......and a great big old fake
you took my love that night
.......out at the lake
..........out at the lake
..............you great big old fake
[verse]
Treat me bad
.......treat me bad
I Cry In Pain Over You
Treat me bad
.......beat me bad
I cry in pain over you
Fake A Smile And You Won't Know
Deep down I Knew
.......I was Just A Game Show fer you
.............game show fer you
2006-11-01 11:04:35 · answer #4 · answered by lady_bird_2000us 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sounds extremely generic and lame. Get off the traditional ABAB rhyming scheme. Who says you need to rhyme at all? Next time, just write a bunch of lines, regardless of if they rhyme or not.
2006-11-01 10:43:25 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
I think it has a lot of potential, especially for a rock song. Keep going with it..
2006-11-01 10:38:30 · answer #6 · answered by reneechipman 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The lyrics are good so far, I guess I'll go with rock.... I don't know, but it's good.
2006-11-01 10:38:56 · answer #7 · answered by blue_bandgeek26 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it is really good. if you were to add on, i think it would be better a poem.
very nice!
2006-11-01 10:38:43 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
yea its pretty good for a start. finish and it will be even better
2006-11-01 10:38:04 · answer #9 · answered by Bleeding Love 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋