AIDS is possibly the worst epidemic ever encountered by man-kind, but the world can change the course of Africa’s future by donating food, water, money, and moral support. (SENTENCE)An HIV-positive singer by the name of Grace Nakawunde sings....
Do you have any ideas for a sentence to "transitionize" into the next idea.... i know transitionize is not a word.
2006-11-01 08:48:52 · 8 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
how about this:
AIDS is possibly the worst epidemic ever encountered by man-kind, but the world can change the course of Africa's future by donating food, water, money, and moral support. One of the people lending a hand with the moral support of the war against AIDS is an HIV- positive singer by the name of Grace Nakawunde.
yes? no? you decide.
2006-11-01 08:59:26 · answer #1 · answered by Miss Rachel 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Readability is inversely proportional to sentence length.¹
If you insist on doing this, replace the period with a semicolon and put the letter A in lower case. You can also replace the period with a comma and use the conjunction and.
In either case it is poor English to combine two different thoughts in one sentence. If you are looking for clarity, your first sentence should be terminated after man-kind. Drop the conjunction and start a second sentence with "The world....". This makes your writing easier to understand. It also lessens the chance of ambiguity creeping in.
The sentence you propose incorporating in the first sentence might even be better used to start a new paragraph. It's hard to tell without the full context.
2006-11-01 09:24:45 · answer #2 · answered by Helmut 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Teachers serve scholars via teaching them and medical professionals serve sufferers via curing them. Professions like those call for a degree of dedication that most often calls for one to sacrifice entertainment time and exercise for the improvement of others. A significant existence is a lifetime of selflessness.
2016-09-01 05:40:16 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
You could use the words 'for example' to begin the sentence 'An HIV positiive singer'..etc
2006-11-01 08:55:55 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
People infected with AIDS are everywhere around us, some are even celebrities.
I don't know... is that person a celeb? If they are you can use that sentence.
2006-11-01 08:51:36 · answer #5 · answered by juliefan 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
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Vocalist Grace Nakawunde (HIV positive), sings....
2006-11-01 08:59:09 · answer #6 · answered by ZoFro 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
you need more than one sentence to connect those two.
2006-11-01 08:55:37 · answer #7 · answered by nobudE 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
nope sry
2006-11-01 08:50:15 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋