Wandering detatched, alone on the street
known as the "Ghost Daughter"
A foreboding presence, bitter and taunting
Killed by her beligerent father
The despairing spirit, once so loving of life
Never passed truely on
Her father so callous to end her life
She hopes for love but gets none
..yes i wrote this myself.
2006-11-01 07:27:02 · 9 answers · asked by Me♥Manatees 3 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
I'd give ya a nine. I think it's a great poem. Well written, deep and emotional and overall really good. I used to write a lot an now I know why I don't anymore. None of my stuff could even hope to be this good.
2006-11-01 07:40:30 · answer #1 · answered by svg7373 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
7
2006-11-01 16:49:19 · answer #2 · answered by Shady Lady 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
8/10
2006-11-01 15:48:07 · answer #3 · answered by RNM 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very haunting and moody. It's a 10+++. Very lovely poem. I love it.
2006-11-01 15:32:01 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
9 i liked it alot it's really deep and has a lot of feelings expressed good job!!!
2006-11-01 15:34:06 · answer #5 · answered by rAwR♥ 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
6
Good use of vocabulary and easily understood
could flow a little smoother though
Nice work.
2006-11-01 15:31:57 · answer #6 · answered by hereintheunivers 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
man u suck....
i guess i threw my writing dreams away for a good reason i cant write worth crap.......
urs 9 and half
2006-11-01 15:30:11 · answer #7 · answered by sweet18apparatus 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
9 I hope you will be o.k, lifes great, get away.
2006-11-01 15:31:46 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
EIGHT!!
2006-11-01 15:28:35 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋