hw help/rewording?

Question

The sex of the attitude target (i.e, lesbian or gay men) interacted with respondent sex to affect attitudes.

How can i reword this?

Answer 1

The target gender, along with the responding gender, affected attitudes about...

You need to specify what attitudes were affected and how. Then the sentence will make sense.

Hope this helps. Cheers, K

Answer 2

Paraphrase: Write it in Your Own Words

http://owl.english.purdue.edu/handouts/research/r_paraphr.html

Practice Exercises in Paraphrasing

http://owl.english.purdue.edu/handouts/research/r_paraphrEX1.html

A paraphrase is an indirect quotation. It must be documented because it relates in your own words and style the thoughts you have borrowed from another person. Paraphrases are more flexible than quotations. They fit more smoothly into your text, and you can express your own interpretations as you paraphrase.

http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/research/usingpara.html

http://www.utoronto.ca/ucwriting/paraphrase.html

Good luck.

Kevin, Liverpool, England.