I have never writeen a poem before, and I am struggling so bad.
Please do not be too harsh, but tips are welcome. Thanks
Sleepless nights,
and endless days.
Weekends turn,
To weeks on end.
Time stands still
When you are all alone
Just left to be.
Cant anyone see
That its bothering me?
I am having such a hard time with these poems!!!! Can someone please tell me how to write an anecdote, and maybe a website that can help me.
2006-10-31
16:55:14
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6 answers
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Well I expected criticism!!
THANKS!!
I am going to try and make it longer, or my creative writing class.
2006-10-31
17:03:27 ·
update #1
Sleepless nights,
and endless days.
Weekends turn,
To weeks on end.
Time stands still
When your alone,
Just left to be.
Cant anyone see
That its bothering me?
The days
When everything was ok
Have faded
The good times
didn’t last
And now its
A memory,
Just left to be.
Cant anyone see
That its bothering me?
2006-10-31
17:09:32 ·
update #2
sorry but the way you worded doesnt convey what the poem personally stands for:)
2006-10-31
17:13:41 ·
update #3