I need a few ideas of how to word a thesis statement about there needing to be stricter penalties and stricter sentencing regaurding pedophiles/ sex offenders and repeat offenders of sex crimes .....I'm just not sure to start it......but I know what I want to say???? Any ideas of suggestions would be greatly appreciated
2006-10-31 14:07:15 · 8 answers · asked by Lyssa D 2 in Education & Reference ➔ Higher Education (University +)
Maybe something like:
Because the rate of recidivism for sex offenders is so high, and because of the devastation this particular form of violent crime has on its victims, the penalties for even first time offenders should be dramatically increased in the interest of public safety.
2006-10-31 14:55:06 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 3⤊ 0⤋
Just a few ideas here ...
How about simply asking the question, "Should there be stricter laws in-place for pedophiles?" Just remember to answer that question in your essay ...
The long arm of the law should be far stricter with those who lay their hands on others without consent.
Forced sex is a sentence, not just two words.
2006-10-31 14:23:16 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Taking a lesson from our farming community; They have a procedure for Bulls that is 100% effective. Repeat sexual predators have a problem they can't control. I think removing the cause of their problem will at the very least save any future victims from any repeating of their crimes.
2006-10-31 14:23:56 · answer #3 · answered by the_buccaru 5 · 2⤊ 0⤋
why don't you include in your paper/speech whatever that in addition to stricter penalties, they should get mandatory counseling? a lot of those "monsters" were abused themselves, and with therapy to get over their own trauma, they are no longer a danger. some of them can't be helped and some don't want to be helped, but many can and do.
2006-10-31 14:11:04 · answer #4 · answered by advicemom 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
In 8th grade, i replaced into taught an equation that pertains to Thesis assertion. The equation is: subject remember+Opinion+because of the fact+3 motives Ex: Cameras interior the lecture room = subject remember won't benefit the scholars because of the fact= because of the fact it is going to waste money, will shrink pupils' chatting with eachother (Social progression is going down), and scholars will care extra of our ecosystem= 3 motives Thesis replaced into: Cameras interior the lecture room won't benefit the scholars because of the fact it is going to waste money, will shrink pupils' chatting with eachother (Social progression is going down), and scholars will care extra of our ecosystem
2016-11-26 21:24:11 · answer #5 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Just start writing something, even if it's something from the middle of what you were planning to write. Get something down, and go from there - I always have trouble getting started with essays; you just have to start wherever you can and edit it later.
2006-10-31 14:10:00 · answer #6 · answered by eri 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Write your paper first, then take out key information and write the thesis last.
2006-10-31 14:11:10 · answer #7 · answered by tiafromtijuana 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Because xxx have one of the highest rate of repeat crimes, xxx need to be dealt with much more strictly than other criminal profiles who tend to be one-offs or rehabilitateable.
or something like that.
2006-10-31 14:14:18 · answer #8 · answered by diesel_pusher2 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋