I aam really bad at making conclusions for a persuasive paragraph. Could someone helpme with this one?
Also, a lunch period that is so short allows minimal time to talk and visit with your friends. In example, I once got to the table, ate my lunch, and had enough time to have one short conversation with a single one of my friends. Students need a longer lunch to “reset their brain” by talking with their peers. Talking with friends at lunch improves social life and actually has been proven to improve grades.
2006-10-30 22:47:48 · 6 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
PLease Ignore the above paragraph. I figured that one out, but now I'm stuck with this one:
Eating is supposed to take at least twenty minutes, not be limited to. The stomach needs time to leisurely take in the food. If not, the stomach will be rushed into digesting. Also, it takes about twenty minutes for the brain to register that you are “full.” Eating in less than twenty minutes actually causes eating larger servings, which increases chances of being obese.
2006-10-30 22:57:28 · update #1
I don't think this paragraph needs a concluding sentence, because it is so short and makes clear points.
However, the grammar could use some tweaking. Remove "Also", and rephrase the first sentence to something like, "A 19 minute lunch period does not allow enough time to talk and visit with friends." Change "In example" to "For example,". Support your argument with a published study, or even better, something from a textbook used in your school.
2006-10-30 23:01:28 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Try this:
A short lunch period leaves little time to talk and visit with your friends. For example, I only had time for a short conversation with one of my friends during a lunch break. Students need a longer lunch break to “reset their brain” by talking with peers. Talking with friends at lunch improves social life and is proven to improve grades. Therefore, longer lunch breaks create smarter and friendlier students.
For the next paragraph
Eating takes at least twenty minutes. The stomach needs this time to digest the food. If not, digestion will be rushed and could cause painful cramping. Also, it takes about twenty minutes for the brain to register that you are “full.” Because of this, eating in less than twenty minutes actually causes a person to eat larger servings, which increases the chance of becoming overweight. As can be seen, eating in only twenty minutes is harmful to your general health.
It wouldn't hurt to include some citations to support your claims.
2006-10-30 23:01:08 · answer #2 · answered by ? 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The importance of having lunch!
2006-10-30 22:55:59 · answer #3 · answered by sbourdjian 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
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2016-10-21 01:07:56 · answer #4 · answered by itani 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think you've got a good sentence there. It is positive, and gives information.
2006-10-30 22:56:17 · answer #5 · answered by tweetymay 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
makin conclusion is easy just don't ever thinking stuck and go for it finally u will weldone
2006-10-30 23:01:57 · answer #6 · answered by victoria 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋