365 days have come and gone
still we're here without you
and it just feels so wrong.
it's like we're living in 2 worlds
here on earth, alone
and with you in heaven, that's home.
but we don't know how to get there just yet
because i guess our time's not through
just know that when we can
we'll find our way to you.
and tho we cried and couldn't understand
when the angels came for you
we soon found peace in god's promised plan
for the heaven he had in store for you.
see, god couldn't wait to take you home
to show you everything
you'd never known.
to watch you run
on streets of gold
to see you marvel
at things untold.
to watch you
sing, and laugh, and play
yes, god chose that special day.
and when OUR time is finished
and through;
just watch--
we'll be smiling as god brings us home,
To You.....
2006-10-30 05:01:02 · 13 answers · asked by lifeistough_period 1 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
i wrote it for my bro who died a year ago, when he was 19.
2006-10-30 05:04:55 · update #1
excellent..very thought full and moving...very thought provoking and touching....i emailed this to all the people on my email list..great poem..sorry, for the loss of your beloved brother..Shalom, peace to you....
2006-10-30 06:19:34 · answer #1 · answered by morris the cat 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
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2016-10-21 00:12:59 · answer #2 · answered by lindgren 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That is beautiful! I am so sorry for the loss of your brother at such a young age. But you have written a wonderful, loving memorial for him. And I am sure that he is smiling down on you and so is God.
2006-10-30 13:46:58 · answer #3 · answered by Donna J 4 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Ok that made me cry... its a brilliant poem you did good and I am sorry for the loss of your brother. God bless and peace be with you
2006-10-30 07:20:25 · answer #4 · answered by cavatina_2005 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
That's beautiful, but very sad! I think you are a wonderful poet. I am sorry for the loss of your brother.
2006-10-30 10:43:03 · answer #5 · answered by isayssoccer 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
This is a lovely poem. I'm sorry your brother died.
2006-10-30 11:24:16 · answer #6 · answered by c_dreamer11 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think it is a good poem. Well done. Its very true. Write on girl!
2006-10-30 05:04:06 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
this is such a sweet poem yet full of sorrow. good job.
2006-10-30 05:16:17 · answer #8 · answered by CreativeGEEK 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's very touching and sweet.
2006-10-30 05:06:26 · answer #9 · answered by roginaru 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I thought it was beautiful and touching.
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2006-10-30 05:49:24 · answer #10 · answered by twowords 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋