I have before, seems to always happen after I move to a new place, for a while afterwards I'll wake up and think I'm in my old place and I get that second or two of shock when I open my eyes and it's not the same.
2006-10-29 18:23:57
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answered by cynthetiq 6
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It got cut off, just to let you know. I would rate this a 5. You had a lot of grammatical errors and some trouble with the formatting of your paragraphs, but otherwise it was a pretty interesting story. Good job on the immediate action. It kept me interested and alert. I noticed you used the word "um" a lot. That was quite distracting. Also, I didn't really like your choice of the verb "hissed" in the dialogue after the first paragraph. It didn't really go with the image you described and it just seemed like it didn't fit. Also, in the 16th paragraph, you should spell out the word "three," as it is the rule to spell numbers under 10. You get the idea-it needs some cleaning up. :) (Also, I really hope Lynne and Christian aren't vampires. No offense, but that whole idea is way over used. I am anxious to see what they actually are, though. And it did sound a lot like Twilight, so PLEASE try to be original.)
2016-03-28 01:25:06
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answered by Anonymous
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No but I have woke up before I opened my eyes and wished I was somewhere else!
2006-10-29 18:24:14
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answered by *~BETHY~* 6
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Sometimes I moved over two years ago but I still sometimes wake up thinking I'm still in my old apartment.
2006-10-29 18:32:50
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answered by steffi 2
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We've been on several cruises, and the last couple of times, like a day or two after we got home, I woke up disoriented, thinking I was still on the ship.
2006-10-29 18:43:45
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answered by Anonymous
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Oh golly yes. I travel a lot on business and sometimes forget what city I'm in for the first few seconds.
2006-10-29 18:24:00
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answered by Anonymous
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All of the time. Where am I?
2006-10-29 18:24:35
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answered by BarkFitness Pet Sitting 2
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Yes....somehow I often wake up thinking I'm in my childhood-home.
2006-10-29 18:23:47
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answered by Joshua 5
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It's happened before.
2006-10-29 21:21:42
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answered by anitababy.brainwash 6
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Yes, sometimes.
2006-10-29 18:43:22
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answered by St Harpy 6
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