Islam
Horror story of today,
reflection of Christ.
No so many,see a tear drop
blinded by a cry.
2006-10-29 16:50:10 · 7 answers · asked by ? 4 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
The Bible
there is no final,perfect, or dead
only (relativness) not illusion
and every reflection,you have met,lives
till the conclusion.
I do understand.
2006-10-29 17:24:12 · update #1
ANKH
In the emptiness, in the ocean of creation,
dreaming and longing for knock to my door.
for girl or for lady,with touch to reflect,
the joy of belonging,and for happieness,
in a deep of a tear drop.
2006-10-29 17:31:23 · update #2
David star
You the beatiful,I don't love you
I only want to be 'u' to be loved,
as only (i) ken do.
2006-10-29 17:41:53 · update #3
YAHOO I have no choice I have
YAHW
2006-10-29 17:47:44 · update #4
would you mind to follow my suit,
2006-10-29 17:50:05 · update #5
question is a treason,judge not.
2006-10-29 17:53:22 · update #6
http://www.hebrew4christians.com/Names_of_G-d/names_of_g-d.html
2006-10-29 18:03:16 · update #7
IXI
heaven and hell
particularly partial question
stay where you are
2006-11-04 17:09:03 · update #8
linguistic sexual harrasment
what do you mean
what have meant ?
isn't great to feel greed
Barbara Streisand
Barbara Fromm Przyszl'a ? Hell ?
2006-11-05 01:20:33 · update #9
The Nature of things TV Ontario
2006-11-05 01:31:02 · update #10
what do you want ?
a microphone,one burger
one scotch and a beer.
singular poetic expression
love or leave it.
2006-11-05 01:52:51 · update #11
may I please introduce myself,
sooner or later
2006-11-05 16:00:49 · update #12
Kent Kingdom
2006-11-05 16:04:03 · update #13
reasonable doubt,
no doubt yes.
2006-11-06 01:10:03 · update #14
erase last two lines please
by chance belong to quo vadis
2006-11-06 01:16:37 · update #15
'F'
2006-10-29 16:52:46 · answer #1 · answered by Pie's_Guy 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Your spelling is all wrong, ur commas confuse me, and ur poem looks like u cut and pasted sum words or phrases from other poems. Also, you go from sumthing like 9/11 to a woman? I'm confused...stupid ppl like me are not gonna be able to understand ur poem, and we're the majority! We're not Einestein here! Fix ur spelling, grammar, and punctuations and put some real meaning into it...something about YOU, not sad events like that...unless ur a survivor of that or sumthing...
2006-11-02 23:42:33 · answer #2 · answered by fliptastic 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I rate it zero because I do not understand what you are trying to convey.
2006-10-30 00:53:24 · answer #3 · answered by Madinahbi Binti Abdul Hamid AHM 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
i don't understand what you're trying to say but i'll give you an A for effort.
2006-10-30 00:59:02 · answer #4 · answered by rickys_lil_mama 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
ummm..........what? I don't get it. Honestly, I'll give you a 0
2006-10-30 02:38:03 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
has no depth or point of view
2006-10-30 00:53:21 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
AWFUL
2006-10-30 04:45:05 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋