Remarkably, he even had the will-power to lie to one of the people who he endeared the most: Eumaeus.
2006-10-29 12:46:11 · 8 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
"will-power" should be "willpower"
2006-10-30 01:33:47
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answered by LadyPom 2
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and "who" should be "whom"
also, did you mean he endeared Eumeaus, or did you mean that Eumeaus endeared him?
endear: to cause to become beloved or admired
Remarkably, he even had the will-power to lie to one of the people whom he valued the most: Eumaeus.
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Remarkaby, he even had the will-power to lie to one of the people to whom he was the most endeared: Eumaeus.
2006-10-30 06:10:33 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I'm thinking it would be better this way...
Remarkably, he even had the will-power to lie to one of the people whom he endeared the most, Eumaeus.
2006-10-29 20:56:37 · answer #3 · answered by Speaking_Up 5 · 1⤊ 1⤋
No.
Remarkably Eumaeus had the will power to lie to one of the people he cared for most.
2006-10-29 20:48:51 · answer #4 · answered by redunicorn 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Remarkably, he even had the will power to lie to one of the people whom he endeared the most:Eumaeus.
2006-10-29 21:32:35 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
The strengh of will to lie is an oxymoron. A strong will is often requrired to tell the truth, whey a falsehood might be easier.
2006-10-29 20:59:51 · answer #6 · answered by Vince M 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
could you sub the word people to persons? That people word doesn't seem to fit, to me.
2006-10-29 20:54:01 · answer #7 · answered by lazycat 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
I would take out "even", but I'm just guessing....
2006-10-29 21:11:49 · answer #8 · answered by mabell1025 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋