Had he instead chosen to kidnap or threaten her, he would have put his entire fate into jeopardy.
2006-10-29 11:56:28 · 6 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
I would word it thus:
Had he chosen to kidnap her and threaten her instead, he would have put his entire fate into jeopardy.
Really, though, not an impressive sentence. How about:
Kidnapping or threatening her would have put his future in great jeopardy!
2006-10-29 12:00:55 · answer #1 · answered by schweetums 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
No it isn't.
Try this:
"If he chose to kidnap, or threaten her, he would have put his entire fate into jeopardy."
Much cleaner and grammatically correct.
2006-10-29 20:01:10 · answer #2 · answered by MattyG 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Ya! But some peeps might not under chill this ting of ur brain, DUDE!
2006-10-29 20:18:08 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yes, but I would take out the "instead".
2006-10-29 20:04:37 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yes, I think so.
2006-10-29 20:05:47 · answer #5 · answered by shellese2 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It is absolutely correct.
2006-10-29 20:14:26 · answer #6 · answered by bibliophile31 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋