i need to know one for a orphan train rider and how he was sent away to the west i need to write a catchy one plzz one that will make my readers like "oh snap let me find out why that happen or like really let me continue reading?
2006-10-29 10:26:57 · 4 answers · asked by y@ boi 3 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
"Off to the vastness of the west, separated only by the track I have not yet been whisked across..."
Maybe a little over the top - let's say the orphan is of high vernacular.
2006-10-29 10:36:44 · answer #1 · answered by Action 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
YOU are going to be a loser this way. Tax your brain a bit. It'll give at least ten opening sentences that will carry the essence of your essay. I would guess that you haven't written the essay yet. What you are actually facing is a writer's block. Take a sheet of paper and scribble all the thoughts that come to your mind as you think about the topic. Then re arrange them in a logical order. By the time you finish the first paragraph, you will have your opening sentence selected by YOU and not the crowd.
2006-10-29 18:36:24 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
The train left the station carrying the orphan boy to dangers he had never experienced, in trhe great American west, he didn't choose to go but now he was on his way.
2006-10-29 18:34:01 · answer #3 · answered by Robert P 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
imagine a little orphan sitting on a train, scared and alone, he is waiting to go west to the land of opportunities and adventure.
2006-10-29 18:30:20 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋