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I need help with some english home work?
ok well this isnt for english class bt its like english im suppose to write a childrens story and make a powerpoint i have to write the story about "bootscoot the pony" and all i have so far is "there once was a pony named bootscoot. He lived in a pasture with his dad." i need help to write it i dont know how to write it... im not getting graded on the story its self im getting graded on the powerpoint if i did the powerpoint correctly its for computer class so if someone can help write the story that would be awesome... it has to be about that topic i cant change it and its due in a few hours i have to hurry and get a story so i can do the powerpoint (the graded part) real fast please help and please dont just post part of a story i got alot of that last time with people saying to email them for more info and i never got a reply... first with the best (in my opinion) complete story i promise to select as best answer in a few days...

2006-10-29 10:22:42 · 4 answers · asked by ? 2 in Education & Reference Homework Help

im not insisting on hurrying anyone and i didnt wait till the last minute i posted this before i got some good ideas but no idea on how to finish it... and i wont get in trouble for copying it our teacher said we could have someone else write the story if we wont he just wants to see the powerpoint cause its a computer class... not english...or writing... please help...

2006-10-29 10:36:29 · update #1

4 answers

I love writing so if you ever need any help, don't hesitate to ask me. As far as the story you have to write, use vivid colors and all 5 senses. What did the pony look like, smell, see, etc? Also, children's stories normally contain a moral or lesson, so don't forget that aspect.

Fill this out, it'll help you write your story---
Setting/Time/Place:
Characters (their name/their traits/how they act/what they look like):
Problem:
Plot/Events:
Resolution:

The only problem I have with your question is you wanting someone to write the whole thing for you. That's called plagiarism and can result in you failing school, being suspended, or even going to jail! I'm sure you are able to write the story, otherwise your teacher wouldn't have assigned it. Be creative and, next time, don't procrastinate.

Good luck!

2006-10-29 10:25:34 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

I love reading. I always loved making up stories, and then in second grade I saw that it was even better when I wrote them down. When we read poems in third grade, I decided to write one and found that I liked that almost as much as writing stories. Same goes for essays. Now I mostly concentrate on a book I am attempting to write, but over the years I have switched off between short stories, poems, and full length stories. The longer stories never got very far because I wasn't mature enough to stick to them. Until about a year ago, all my stories were less than ten pages long, unfinished, or poems. Now that I am a bit older, I can focus on one story longer (122 pages today!). PS> I also like the fact that when I'm writing, everything is the way I want it to be, your rules don't have to apply to my world. I can say what I want to and nobody can interrupt me. I'm a bit shy, so I don't do that a lot in real life.

2016-05-22 06:05:49 · answer #2 · answered by Maria 4 · 0 0

It is the power point that is stumping you. Don't let it. This only means it is graphic intensive. So think Primary reader ages 6-8. Lovely pictures of the field, pictures of the horse and father, then pictures of capture or some other conflict resolution. You could even make a dream where the pony wishes to be a child and realizes he would loose his family and freedom. Liken it to the child who wishes to run away only to find he is not really as ready to be on his own as he thought. This can be done in about 12 slides with 2 sentences each slide. Good Luck!

2006-10-29 10:31:10 · answer #3 · answered by Walking on Sunshine 7 · 1 0

1. I don't think you should wait until the last minute to do your homework.
2. I don't think it's polite to tell us to hurry up because you chose to wait to the last minute.
3. Do the "who, what, when, where, and why" and you should be able to write the story yourself.

2006-10-29 10:32:45 · answer #4 · answered by sonorarat 3 · 1 1

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