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I sit quietly staring at the clock watching time pass with a blank piece of paper and a pencil in front of me. The second hand on the clock moves slower then my parents old Atari. Less then twenty three hours to finish this essay. The paper blinds me with its empty whiteness. It is most assuredly whiter then that kid down the street who is allergic to the sun. The pencil is no better then the paper, sitting there mocking my inability to put it to good use. I must have writer’s block.

2006-10-29 10:01:47 · 8 answers · asked by Kate 2 in Education & Reference Words & Wordplay

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No Title As a Result of Writer's Block

2006-10-29 10:10:12 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

Sentenced to write.

BTW "The paper blinds me with its empty whiteness. It is most assuredly whiter then that kid down the street who is allergic to the sun" is a horrible sentence pair. Try "I can think only of blizzards, snow globe whiteouts and polar bears" for the second sentence. You've already said the paper is stunningly white. No need for the second sentence comparing the whiteness to something else.

"no better then" should read "no better than"

2006-10-29 10:11:03 · answer #2 · answered by NordicGuru 3 · 0 0

Blocked In, Blocked Out.

2006-10-29 22:52:00 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

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2016-10-16 12:56:09 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

"Block extends to the title too"

2006-10-29 22:48:06 · answer #5 · answered by Nisha 2 · 0 0

the white page.

2006-10-29 10:09:38 · answer #6 · answered by donna r 3 · 1 0

"Hollow Conviction"
You could improve your sentence a whole lot.

2006-10-29 10:44:04 · answer #7 · answered by Kohn 2 · 0 1

Uhhh...

2006-10-29 10:04:36 · answer #8 · answered by Ricardo C 4 · 0 0

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