I need an introduction for my paper?

Question

I need a good topic sentence for my paper. My paper is about the sights, smells and sounds of thanksgiving. It needs to be in Present tense, Active voice, and can use first person pronouns. need to use metaphors, and simlies to draw the reader in and to paint a picture in their mind. PLEASE HELP ME!! it's due on thursday and i have to have my rough draft done by tuesday. PLEASE!!! Thank you ahead of time!

Answer 1

Break your paper down into an outline such as the following:

Par 1:
*Effective Start (set a scene, famous quote, ask a question, or state a fact)
*Additional Info
*Thesis statement (your purpose for writing your paper)

Par 2:
*Topic sentence supporting thesis 1
*Supporting detail 1
*Supporting detail 2
*Supporting detail 3
*Concl. Statement

Par 3:
*Topic sentence supporting thesis 2
*Supporting detail 1
*Supporting detail 2
*Supporting detail 3
*Concl. Statement

Par 4:
*Topic sentence supporting thesis 3
*Supporting detail 1
*Supporting detail 2
*Supporting detail 3
*Concl. Statement

Par 5:
*Restate your thesis (in different words)
*Give additional info
*Closing (leave your reader with something to think about)


then go back and make sure you only used 1st person, active voice, etc. if you break it down it will seem A LOT easier and you'll see exactly what you need to make your paper better

good luck!