Tick tock went the hands on the clock,
time to unwind in the back of your dirty mind,
Hmmmm- that's the sound that she makes when she wakes and sees the size of my manhood,
Wow- thank you now,
I looked in the box for my favourite socks but when I pulled them out they were covered in the chicken-pox,
Cream- was that a dream?
I saw you in a film in the 1970's,
Slow it down for the people in the back row,
Getting hot and sticky at the sight of my afro,
Jump around to the sound of the orchestra,
Looking in the Yellow Pages for your phone number,
Stick 'em up suckers!
Don't touch what you can't afford.
Genius or what?!
2006-10-29 06:30:20 · 11 answers · asked by tjyf j 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
one of the worst poems i've ever read
2006-10-29 06:41:12 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
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2016-12-28 07:49:45 · answer #2 · answered by bruss 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I am definately not a critic or a pro but it's a mix of doctor seuss and good creativity
keep up the good work you got the right idea
2006-10-29 06:36:12 · answer #3 · answered by momma whitley 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i got a laugh out it if you meant it as a joke poem then it was pretty good
2006-10-29 06:41:37 · answer #4 · answered by ? 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Uhhh... do you want the truth? of course you do! MMMMM... you mite want to quit this line of work and think of another course you mite want to take, cuz this wont cut it! not genius
sry
2006-10-29 06:39:18 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
noo sry.thats the worst poem ive ever read.lol.
2006-10-29 06:36:34 · answer #6 · answered by *~Love?~* 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sorry, not good in my opinion. Maybe work on it for rap song,
2006-10-29 06:36:01 · answer #7 · answered by hillbilly 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Huh?
2006-10-29 06:35:19 · answer #8 · answered by dollface 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
definately or what!
here's one for ya
be cool, stay in school!
2006-10-29 06:38:46 · answer #9 · answered by iwondersoiask 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
don't quit your day job
2006-10-29 06:33:20 · answer #10 · answered by TheDoctor 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋