i need to write a poem on feelings and i have no idea wat to do!!! and weneva i think of sumthin i cant write about it! i no it sounds lame but pleeeez help me.. it is dew in 2moz
2006-10-29 04:29:03 · 16 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
Write a poem about how you are feeling now - frustrated!
2006-10-29 04:34:47 · answer #1 · answered by Funky Little Spacegirl 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Poems are easier than you think.
Just write your feelings down on a page and then just chop it up into even lines that seem to have form of rhythm. Remember, it doesn't have to rhyme. People often get caught up trying to write a masterpiece that rhymes.
Just put your feelings down and try to compare it to things so that you can create similes and metaphors that will make it easier for others to relate to what you're feeling.
Oh and dude, you do need to sort out the spelling.
2006-10-29 04:41:05 · answer #2 · answered by Invisible 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
think about a time that was really important in your life and write down all the emotions you felt on a piece of paper. then try and write the whole story out i guess and make look like something u would want to read or you could make up a story or something. i dont really know if this helps but at least I tried.
~Cassie~
2006-10-29 04:59:38 · answer #3 · answered by CD 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Just write down the list of the words like emotion, love, sympathy, emphathy, angry, happy, enjoy, entertain, lovely, beauty, enchanting, attractive, innocent, heart, and so on. Then just arrage this words into sentence or phrases then come up with a poem.
2006-10-29 17:18:36 · answer #4 · answered by digendra 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
if you write your poem for english class using your example of your writing, I really dont think the contenet is going to matter. The teacher will never get past the bad grammar and spelling.
2006-10-29 04:33:47 · answer #5 · answered by cabjr1961 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Why dont you put yourself in a situation, Eg being homeless or you've come home from school etc and the house is deserted and youve been left alone....how would you feel?
Just use your imagination also think about the atmosphere around you.....
Put yourself in that postion.....
Remember it doesnt have to rhyme!!
2006-10-29 23:04:35 · answer #6 · answered by nickyd44 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
cheeky! do your homework!!
look, why dont you write something and post that and ask for feedback. then all the good people on this site might give u comments and add suggestions that might make it better. or u might just find that when u start you come up with something fab and u dont want anyone's help after all.
good luck!
xx
2006-10-29 04:32:57 · answer #7 · answered by third space 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
When I finally managed to translate your question from text speak to everyday English, which took some time, I think you need to go back to learn basic English first.
Feel free to repost your question in ENGLISH and then you might get some better and more helpful responses.
2006-10-29 04:44:05 · answer #8 · answered by Shane 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
harken unto me ye people of this land,
i have a tail to tell you,
i look up this world and see many things,
i feel the feelings of those people alone and hurting, their lonliess,
blackness i feel, from them, form soul to body,
they are lost, none will help,
dark are their feeling, with hurt so red and raw, after reaching out ,
hope is there but buried, a ray of help, sunshine form a friend to help bring joy can help.
you see i am the joy and help, share me please,
it is one infection all, ye people want
2006-10-29 04:38:55 · answer #9 · answered by DARLENE C 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Just promise me you'll use better spelling and grammar when you write your paper. I think you should write about how much anxiety having to write the paper caused you.
2006-10-29 04:31:52 · answer #10 · answered by odandme 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋