I feel silly doing this but here it goes...
Ecstasy of madness
envelops the night of calm
the sheets are burning blood
caress of light and charm
free the voluptious mumble
into a side of loud mercies
let the dark hide your face
but embrace the indicent audicies
expressions of falter
giving way to hunger
claw into the red sheets
velvety rough indistinct
another side of eroticism
rubbing backwards to the night
till dawn witnesses the crime
of erotic dances of light
2006-10-29 01:30:51 · 5 answers · asked by ? 3 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
That is the best poem I've read on yahoo answers! I really like the choice of words, and the message...oh, it is just so cool! Did you write this? I love the way you put it together. The flow is marvelous, and it makes people think - something every kind of artist wants. You should continue to write. Poems like that should be shared everywhere. I'm very impressed with what you've done. Keep on writing!
Hey, and it's nice to find a fellow writer who composes poems! rock on
2006-10-29 01:35:07 · answer #1 · answered by Corinne 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think it's awesome!! Great Job!! And when can we expect to that and others published by you?
On a serious note:
If you are serious about getting your peoms published I would not reccommend putting them on here for the public to see before you do so. Someone might steel your hard work for themseves. If it's just a hobby of yours and you dont care to get published then thats fine, but be aware that others will still steel your work and get it published for themselves. You do wonderful writing and you shouldnt waste that.
2006-10-29 09:37:58 · answer #2 · answered by Help Me Help You 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
A decent poem
2006-10-29 09:46:23 · answer #3 · answered by Thomas S 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Well, I'll tell you. I think you have aptitude as a poet--and you also must be a great lover! :)
2006-10-29 09:43:49 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
far out man, i am turned on
2006-10-29 09:33:21 · answer #5 · answered by Mark Andrew 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋