make a descriptive essay?

Question

descriptive introduction the title is christmas morning------------------ it was one morning in the winter. waking up to a white christmas. one can smells the pastries aroma in the air . for istance the smell of pumpkin pie and and the sweets spices of ginger and nutmeg that came from the smell of gingbread cookies baking. only want a feel of winter.you could smell the pine for the pine trees . and hear the loud voices of carloers singing.furthermore the children were outside enjoying themshelves just having a great time making snow mans and snow angels.

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Answer 1

And?

Answer 2

That essay, of course, was professionally written. The writer used specific details, example pumpkin pie, sweet spices of ginger, then excited the reader's senses by describing smell, sight, sound, taste, touch, the last one by using hands to make snow men.

Answer 3

A trickle of tear fell from the snowman's face. It was a sombre Christmas morning and the only break from the uncomfortable silence was the crackling sound from the log fire.

Answer 4

Punctuation is awful and grammar, spelling and content not much better! Are you looking for corrections, comments or examples here?

Answer 5

ood question