what would be a good ending for this simile? the moon was as bright as.....???
2006-10-28 03:53:29 · 9 answers · asked by Ariel B 1 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
the moon was as bright as a desk lamp shining in a midnight office
the moon was as bright as a new penny
the moon was as bright as a bleach spot on a black shirt
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Also, think about the character you are writing about, what do they like, what would they describe it as - I always think that it's best to try and write similes from their point of view because it means that you get inside the mind of your character, for example a little kid will have much different experiences than an adult with a PhD or something...
2006-10-28 03:58:38 · answer #1 · answered by Jez 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The moon was as bright as a child's eyes at Christmas.
2006-10-28 04:06:47 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
The moon was as bright as a summer's day.
2006-10-28 15:47:55 · answer #3 · answered by Love&Confusion 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
the moon was as bright as
1. it should be.
2. u
3. me
4. the sun.
on the serious side
1. a button.
2. the day.
3. a new pin.
4. silver.
2006-10-28 06:44:40 · answer #4 · answered by theallknowingguy 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
a mother of Pearl in the display window
2006-10-28 04:10:17 · answer #5 · answered by The phoenix 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
... a gleaming plate just out of the dish washer
2006-10-28 03:59:27 · answer #6 · answered by <3 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
. . . the headlights barreling down the expressway outside my bedroom window.
2006-10-28 08:50:31 · answer #7 · answered by writetolife 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
a fireflys butt
2006-10-28 05:55:35 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
...polished gold.
2006-10-28 18:30:32 · answer #9 · answered by bot_parody 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋