Hey everyone just wanted to inform you that my friend has written her first fic and was wondering if you can read and review it. She is an aspiring writer and is looking for constructive criticism that will later help her in her other works.
Story Title: Broken Down to Tears
Chapter Title: Home
Summary: Love, hate, betrayal, and revenge interfere with two soul’s destiny and keeping them from achieving their main goals in life. One swears to kill his brother, while the other swears to kill those that did them wrong. While one fights for revenge, the other fights to live. When their roads cross can they find among one another the thing that they desperately need…peace? SasukeX??, NaruSaku, NejiTen, ShikIno, KibaHina, etc.
There's going to be action, love, drama, and LOTS of LEMON. ONLY 18 & up of course ;P
There is no Yaoi
CLICK READ REVIEW THANK YOU
http://groups.msn.com/NarutoMangaReturns/fanfiction.msnw?action=get_message&mview=0&ID_Message=203468
2006-10-27 07:55:18 · 3 answers · asked by huh h 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Comics & Animation
Wow, It really good. I don't think I could write fanfiction more like my own fiction. Yet your story was interest and good. Can't wait for the next chapter.
2006-10-27 10:41:13 · answer #1 · answered by Tori 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
This is really good! I love it, and I'm a Naruto freak (more like a Shonen Jump anime freak)
2006-10-27 09:18:43 · answer #2 · answered by CrazyDuck 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
um...... i think that it's pretty good lol
2006-10-27 07:58:07 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋