rachel and amanda are cousins they both go to the same school Mrs snapdragon is there teacher she teaches year too both girls are good students rachel likes mathematics the best amanda is very good at write stories one monday a strange thing happend it was a afternoon both the girls had forgotten they're homework books they came back to school to get them but nobody were a school the poend the door quietly do you know what they saw chalk desk rubber and ruler were doing a dicaation the chalk was writing the words on the blackboard were where the sticky tape and duster the girls asked the glue and scissor but they did'nt nobody new where they were outside playing sports and doing exercises
2006-10-27 02:04:16 · 27 answers · asked by I NEED 2 KNOW !!!!! 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Primary & Secondary Education
You'll never learn if you let others do your homework for you.
2006-10-27 02:06:09 · answer #1 · answered by IC 4 · 2⤊ 1⤋
Don´t you mean "Can you do my homework for me?" BTW, the answer is a big fat NO.
Try doing this exercise for yourself:
rachel and amanda are cousins they both go to the same school Mrs snapdragon is there teacher she teaches year too both girls are good students rachel likes mathematics the best amanda is very good at write stories one monday a strange thing happend it was a afternoon both the girls had forgotten they're homework books they came back to school to get them but nobody were a school the poend the door quietly do you know what they saw chalk desk rubber and ruler were doing a dicaation the chalk was writing the words on the blackboard were where the sticky tape and duster the girls asked the glue and scissor but they did'nt nobody new where they were outside playing sports and doing exercises
2006-10-27 02:13:24 · answer #2 · answered by J C 3 · 1⤊ 1⤋
U really should have answered this yourself.
BTW Honey, if you wanna be a teacher try using the dictionary, "HAPPENED" and "PRACTICE" not what you have.
Can you correct these mistakes?
Rachel and Amanda are cousins and they both go to the same school. Mrs. Snapdragon is their teacher, she teaches year two. Both girls are good students, while Rachel likes mathematics the best Amanda is very good at writing stories.
One Monday a strange thing happened, it was an afternoon that both the girls had forgotten they're homework books. They returned to school to get them but nobody was at the school. They opened the door quietly and do you know what they saw? The chalk, the desk, the rubber, and the ruler were doing a dictation. The chalk was writing the words on the blackboard, but where were the sticky tape and duster? The girls asked the glue and scissors but they didn't know. Nobody knew where they were. Maybe they were outside playing sports and doing exercises.
2006-10-27 02:22:43 · answer #3 · answered by abisdad2004 1 · 1⤊ 3⤋
Can you correct these mistakes?
Rachel and Amanda are cousins who both go to the same school. Mrs. Snapdragon is their teacher and she teaches year two. Both girls are good students. Rachel's favourite subject is mathematics. Amanda is very good at writing stories.
One Monday a strange thing happened. It was an afternoon and both of the girls had forgotten their homework books. They came back to school to get them, but nobody was at school. They opened the door quietly. Do you know what they saw? The chalk, desk rubber and ruler were doing a dictation. The chalk was writing the words on the blackboard. The girls asked the glue and scissors where the sticky tape and duster were, but nobody knew where they were. They ere outside playing sports and doing exercises.
All you people are wrong, I would know best, my best friend is dyslexic and I help her all the time.
2006-10-27 02:20:12 · answer #4 · answered by Bellshk 3 · 1⤊ 2⤋
Rachel and Amanda are cousins. They both attend the same school. Mrs. Snapdragon is their teacher who teaches year two. Both girls are good students. Rachel likes mathematics the best. Amanda is very good at writing stories.
One Monday afternoon a strange thing happened. Both girls had forgotten their homework books, so they came back to school to get them, but no one was there. They opened the door quietly. Do you know what they saw? Chalk, a desk, rubber, and a ruler were doing dictation. The chalk was writing the words on the blackboard, and so were the sticky tape and duster. The girls would have asked the glue and scissors, but they didn't know they were outside playing sports and doing exercises.
Okay, this whole thing makes no sense. If it were left up to me, I'd change the wording and add more conjunctions. It sounds too choppy.
2006-10-27 02:15:41 · answer #5 · answered by wrtrchk 5 · 1⤊ 3⤋
Rachel and Amanda are cousins, they both go to the same school. Mrs Snapdragon is their teacher, she teaches Year Two. Both girls are good students; Rachel likes mathematics the best, Amanda is very good at writing stories.
One monday a strange thing happened: it was an afternoon both the girls had forgotten their homework books, they came back to school to get them but nobody was at school. They opened the door quietly and do you know what they saw? Chalk, desk, rubber and ruler were doing a dictation - the chalk was writing the words on the blackboard!
"Where are the sticky tape and duster?" the girls asked the glue and scissors, but nobody knew where they were: outside playing sports and doing exercises.
That might be slightly wrong but surely it's an improvement!
2006-10-27 02:22:05 · answer #6 · answered by Norks 1 · 1⤊ 3⤋
Rachel and Amanda are cousins. They both go to the same school. Mrs Snapdragon is their teacher. She teaches year two. Both girls are good students. Rachel likes mathematics the best. Amanda is very good at writing stories. One Monday, a strange thing happened. It was an afternoon that both the girls had forgotten their homework books. They came back to school to get them but nobody was at school. They opened the door quietly. Do you know what they saw? Chalk, desk, rubber and ruler were doing a dictation. The chalk was writing the words on the blackboard with the sticky tape and duster. The girls asked the glue and scissors but nobody knew they were outside playing sports and doing exercises
2006-10-27 02:10:04 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 4⤋
Rachel and Amanda are cousins that both go to the same school. Mrs Snapdragon is their teacher and teaches year two. Both girls are good students. Rachel likes mathematics the best and Amanda is very good at writing stories. One monday a strange thing happend. It was a afternoon and both the girls had forgotten they're homework books. They came back to school to get them but nobody was at school. They opened the door quietly, seeing chalk, a desk, a rubber and a ruler, which were doing a dictation. The chalk was writing the words on the blackboard. The girls asked the glue and scissor but they didn't know where they were as they were outside playing sports and doing exercises.
There we go, it is correct now and i did it for you because I want to be a teacher and it gets me the practise!
Can i have 10 points please??
2006-10-27 02:11:27 · answer #8 · answered by Honey!! 5 · 1⤊ 5⤋
There is in fact nothin wrong with it. Spleeing dsoe not mtater as you can raed waht I hvae wirtetn hree. And noone ever reads a full stop. The brain will just put it in there.
The olny rlue is that the frsit and lsat leter is the smae and the ohter lteters are three.
2006-10-27 02:18:57 · answer #9 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 2⤋
Attention Honey
Happend?
A afternoon?
The letter "i" in lower case when used as the first person singular?
Best of luck with your teaching ambitions.
2006-10-27 09:18:27 · answer #10 · answered by Roy S 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yes, I can correct the mistakes in this paragraph.
However, I have better thing to do. Why do you not do your own homework?
Best Wishes and Regards
Biggles
2006-10-27 03:01:06 · answer #11 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 1⤋