One of the main differences between watching a sports event live in contrast to watching it entirely on television is the comfort of the home.
2006-10-27 01:53:04 · 10 answers · asked by ali_ed2001 2 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
yep i fink so
2006-10-27 01:55:28 · answer #1 · answered by hayley m 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It should read like this: One of the main differences between watching a sports event live, in contrast to watching it entirely on television, is the comfort of the home.
2006-10-27 01:58:25 · answer #2 · answered by Shining Ray of Light 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Grammatically incorrect.
correction:
One of the main differences between watching a sports event live, in contrast to watching it entirely on television, is the ability to remain in the comfort of one's home.
2006-10-27 03:53:37 · answer #3 · answered by draws_with_crayons 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think you should consider this option:
One of the main differences between watching a sports event live as compared to watching it on television is the comfort of your home.
2006-10-27 02:10:38 · answer #4 · answered by Doug R 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It might be grammatically correct but what is missing is the emotion you get by attending the game. On TV you are detached, have the commercials that interrupt the flow, and just do not have a feeling of participation.
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2006-10-27 01:57:43 · answer #5 · answered by nikonphotobug 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i think its contrast with, and entirely is not needed.
2006-10-27 01:56:51 · answer #6 · answered by David B 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
yes
2006-10-27 01:56:58 · answer #7 · answered by A Proud Marine's Daughter 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i guess grammar is correct but the necessary punctuation mark (,) is not present
2006-10-27 02:02:45 · answer #8 · answered by sheikaella 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
live, ....television,
2006-10-27 02:03:55 · answer #9 · answered by Shell 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
yes .............
2006-10-27 02:00:49 · answer #10 · answered by Raji 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋