this particular night,i see black. the damned colour
i see it flowing with the wind
painting my world black. yesterday..just the day before
2006-10-27 01:35:18 · 7 answers · asked by shesinluvv 1 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
'good'... for a start your not gonna add to it ,then it's too simple ..............i happen to like gloomy poetry
2006-10-27 05:15:58 · answer #1 · answered by ivory 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Depressing! too simple
2006-10-27 08:40:51 · answer #2 · answered by Biggie 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Good
2006-10-27 16:25:58 · answer #3 · answered by GorgeousGal10 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Too heavy.......
Try... " The boy stood on the burning deck, his feet were covered in blisters. He didn't have a pair of socks, and so he stole his sisters "
2006-10-27 08:40:39 · answer #4 · answered by cerebus 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
too simple
2006-10-27 08:39:09 · answer #5 · answered by civilestimator 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
hmmmm a bit gloomy/not so good
2006-10-27 08:45:31 · answer #6 · answered by ronster56 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
good
2006-10-27 08:38:51 · answer #7 · answered by cirdellin 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋