look at my haiku and give any reactions..?

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those glittering stars
from up above went near us
to give light and warmth

2006-10-26 20:23:50 · 3 answers · asked by whatever. 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay

Its very deep and thoughtful...and actually sticks to the parameters of a haiku.

Keep up the good work.

:-)

2006-10-26 22:15:38 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋

Neat. And it fits the 5,7,5 syllabus rule.

Keep it coming...

GoodLuck!

2006-10-27 04:44:38 · answer #2 · answered by Yvonne Mystic 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋

Hey..... it's nice you know! At least I can't do all this stuff well! Keep it up! ;-)

2006-10-27 04:10:18 · answer #3 · answered by Rey Mysterio 619 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋