I search for meaning
its hard to find
the world is heartless
it makes me blind
my ideas are insulted
derided and mocked
i have been told
im as dumb as a rock
I realy think its hard to know
from where ive come
or where i'll go
2006-10-26 16:43:15 · 12 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
its kinda deep are you emo or do you just like to write those kinda poems over all i like it it actually seems like it has a meaning and not just crap that someone thinks is a poem bravo.
2006-10-26 16:51:46 · answer #1 · answered by superklutsonaskateboard 2 · 3⤊ 1⤋
Your poem is truth only and you can't go anywhere and all the solutions are inside our humans body, so simply you can sit and watch what are the reactions are going inside our body, one thing you should be watch the all senses and no one sense should be preference or hate such as pain.
You have to watch the pain continuously, it will give distroy sure...
This is one of the Indian meditation technique taught by Gautama Buddha.
Now a days this Vipassana Meditation courses as taught by SN Goenka.
www.dhamma.org/
2006-10-26 17:42:32 · answer #2 · answered by Sundarraj 1 · 2⤊ 1⤋
Im gonna do a remix of it....it goes like this.
We all have meaning
its never hard to find
this planet has a heart beat
I can hear it, when im blind
My ideas are my own, insulted and mocked
I wont sit around looking all shocked.
Its not hard to know where you have come from
but where I will go is up to the son
Then give the WORLD thanks for it is the ONE
2006-10-26 19:08:03 · answer #3 · answered by SETH 1 · 1⤊ 1⤋
I think your poem is good
but it's too sad!!
stick to your ideas
cause you're not dumb!
don't let others put you down
cause you are unique
life is worth living
you will find your way
help other people
it will make you feel good
write happy poems
cause you are good!!
2006-10-26 16:59:49 · answer #4 · answered by ausblue 7 · 2⤊ 1⤋
nice for a school kids assignment....(6th grade), lacks depth, Dr. suess has better cadence, you are just stringing together words that rhyme, for the sake of ryhming. The best poems are the one's which flow to the rythm of the writers essence. sorry, but your poem is shallow, brittle, has no substance, does not move, is stagnant, superficial, flacid, empty, transparent...try again...without the constriction of needing to rhyme.
2006-10-26 20:34:17 · answer #5 · answered by Pie's_Guy 6 · 0⤊ 2⤋
good possibly enough to win a monthly contest on poetry.com
2006-10-26 22:43:17 · answer #6 · answered by papabeartex 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Really, it shows your feeling. Good "Poem"
2006-10-26 23:23:50 · answer #7 · answered by The one whom you are waiting.. 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Truthfully? not horrible. Although it is very generic, common and predictable
2006-10-26 16:46:21 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 1⤋
thats nice, go on man
you can rhyme more and more
I'll be happy to meet ya
2006-10-26 18:26:08 · answer #9 · answered by emperor_cyrus77 2 · 1⤊ 1⤋
It's nonsensical and you punctuate like a six-year-old. I kind of like it, though.
2006-10-26 18:33:57 · answer #10 · answered by Drew 6 · 0⤊ 2⤋