Ok For Homework We Had to write about what we thought about love , I Have no idea why the teacher said ," It Will make sense in time." so This Is Mine. PLEASE BE HONEST I CAN TAKE IT!
Ok here it goes
Love
A feeling that conquers all.
Love can hurt or make you feel wonderful.
Love is it real? And if it is why can it cause so much pain, yet make you feel wanted, make you feel safe, by the fact that you can love someone and no one will ever know espect you, unless you walk right up to them and say the three words that can make you or brake you '' I love you."
Love so powerful.
Love so stange.
Love so...
2006-10-26 15:22:55 · 8 answers · asked by bark.bark.bark 3 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
*unless you walk right up to them and say the three words that can make you or break
2006-10-26 15:28:09 · update #1
GIRL Thank you very much!
2006-10-26 15:29:49 · update #2
omg that is sooo good!!
2006-10-26 15:40:00 · answer #1 · answered by Thaya 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I assume this is for English class (but I could be wrong...) If it is, the reason the teach said it will make sense in time is you'll probably be reading and discussing some story that revolves around love (like Romeo and Juliet) and how love and its means as it is shown through that story differs or is similar to what you have written.
I could be completely wrong here, but hey, teachers love to do this kind of junk so yeah, that's my guess as to why they said that.
2006-10-26 22:35:02 · answer #2 · answered by IAskUAnswer 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Looks good to me!
Some spelling mistakes - change 'brake' to 'break' and 'espect' to 'except' and 'stange' to 'strange.'
2006-10-26 22:29:33 · answer #3 · answered by Mary 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
hey looks good to me :-)
except for a few spelling errors like "brake" and "espect."
change 'em to "break" and "except."
very creative though.
2006-10-26 22:30:47 · answer #4 · answered by ♥heartbroken♥ 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
excellent but at the end it's break not brake
2006-10-26 22:26:26 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
sounds good... Its how you feel about the subject whether you have been in love or not it is your view...so go with it guy!
2006-10-26 22:28:40 · answer #6 · answered by ~~Shelly~~ 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Love so "strange"
make you or "break" you
Nice poem....how old are you?
2006-10-26 22:31:53 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
I like that lol.
Keep that.
2006-10-26 22:31:32 · answer #8 · answered by .Anita. 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋