what do you think of my poem?

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what do you think of my poem?

The Sunrise

Black is black as white is white
Losing yourself in the darkness of night
The empty space of nothingness
Nonetheless
Hearing a screech in the night
Seeing nothing but white
On the right
Battling the night

2006-10-26 14:34:25 · 3 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities

3 answers

Nice job.

2006-10-26 14:39:48 · answer #1 · answered by LM 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋

fantastic

2006-10-26 21:41:38 · answer #2 · answered by *certified* 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋

so sweet

2006-10-26 21:36:52 · answer #3 · answered by amberharris20022000 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋