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I am giving an experience certificate to my worker...

can you somebody correct If I have any mistakes

TO WHOMSOEVER IT MAY CONCERN




This is to certify that Mr.X was employed by ABC Pvt.Ltd from 2.03.05 till today.. Mr. X has joined us as Export Executive in January 2005.


It is our company policy that we have a 6 month probation period for new hirings but on the basis of his performance and good technical skills, his employment was confirmed within 3 months

Since he has been employed by us, MR. X has shown an excellent attitude to his work, has been a popular member of our team, and contributed to our success. By implementing a continuous improvement strategy he has made his department an example for the other departments


Due to his skills, commitment and continued hard work, we wish him success in his ambitions.

Answer 1

TO WHOMSOEVER IT MAY CONCERN

This is to certify that Mr.X was employed by ABC Pvt.Ltd from 2.03.05 till today(Put date here).. Mr. X joined us as Export Executive in January 2005.


It is our company's policy that we have a 6 month probation period for new hires, but on the basis of his performance and technical skills, his employment was confirmed within 3 months

Since he has been employed by us, MR. X has shown an excellent attitude with his work, has been a popular member of our team, and has contributed to our success. By implementing a continuous improvement strategy he has made his department an example for the other departments


Because of his skills, commitment, and continued hard work, we wish him success in his future endeavors.

Answer 2

To whomever it may concern,

This is to certify that Mr.X has been employed by ABC Pvt.Ltd from 2.03.05 to the present. Mr. X joined us as Export Executive in January 2005.

It is a company policy that new hirings are subject to a six month probation period. However, on the basis of his performance and good technical skills, his employment was confirmed within three months

From the moment Mr. X started work for us, he has shown an excellent attitude towards his work, has been a popular member of our team, and has contributed to our success. By implementing a continuous improvement strategy he has made his department an example for the other departments to follow.

Due to his skills, commitment, and continued hard work, we wish him success in all his future ambitions.

Answer 3

Couple points first:
Did he start in Feb. or Jan. of 2005? First paragraph states both. Also, spell out all numbers under 10, looks more professional. Lastly, can you embellish on the improvement strategy he did for his department?

REVISED-
To Whom it May Concern:

This is to certify that Mr. X was employed by ABC Pvt. Ltd from February 3, 2005 until (put in current date). Mr. X joined our company as Export Executive.

It is our policy that any new hires have a six-month probation period. Based on Mr. X's performance and good technical skills during this period, his employment with ABC Pvt. Ltd was confirmed within three months.

Since Mr. X has been with our company, he has contributed greatly. Mr. X implemented a continuous improvement strategy within his department, which has now become a basis for all our departments. He was dedicated to his work and worked well with our team. His daily performance, commitment and hard work played a large part in our success over the past (calculate time) years.

We wish him well and for success in his future ambitions.

Answer 4

WHOM SO EVER...
Pvt. Lt. , 2/3/05...
...within 3 months.
...us, Mr. X , ...improvement strategy, he has , ...other departments.

Answer 5

You spelt the word hiring wrong there.

Answer 6

Good job, Dentata.