what do you get out of it?
ON THE HIGH SEAS
by Humanresourcesman
Over the crystal clear ice cubes
I pour the chilled liquid
And crash! boom! go the icebergs
Against the cruise ship in my goblet
2006-10-26 02:19:36 · 16 answers · asked by Anonymous in Social Science ➔ Psychology
I love poetry! And this is quite interesting and creative! Great job! Keep going. :)
2006-10-26 02:29:18 · answer #1 · answered by Annieo 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i will examine line by line....Over the crystal clear ice cubes.....it sound like you have a glass of ice cubes in one hand and you must be looking at it....I pour the chilled liquid.....your other hand has a liquid to pour into the glass with the ice...its a chilled liquid,which could be water,juice,or maybe a beer,not too much with the beer cause beer doesn't go with ice......And crash! boom! go the icebergs.....you must have poured your drink and that's what it might have looked like icebergs.....Against the cruise ship in my goblet........the ice hitting against your glass,is that what you mean? are you standing or sitting to look at this cruise ship? who knows you might have more to add to this,let me know if there is more to this poem!
2006-10-26 10:45:00 · answer #2 · answered by QUEEN K 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I am going to be honest with you...I assume the crashing and booming of the ice bergs has to do with the ice poping when you pour the liquid, chilled beverages do not pop when poured over ice because the liquid is already cold, it is pretty short though, make it shorter and call it a haiku or expand it a bit. you do have good imagery though
2006-10-26 10:31:17 · answer #3 · answered by ninja cat 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
cruise ship? Maybe you just need a vacation? :)
It's ok., but the cruise ship in the goblet.. must have hidden meaning...
2006-10-26 09:30:01 · answer #4 · answered by Friend_88 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It has a nice rhythm to it but when you start to look deeper it sounds like you are drowning in alcohol
2006-10-26 09:27:55 · answer #5 · answered by freemansfox 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Its lame...what is it about? Pouring a drink, then about a ship?? your confussed
2006-10-26 10:07:27 · answer #6 · answered by elena 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Get out of it? Chest is heating up, mate. Cheers!
Nice rhyme btw.
2006-10-26 10:06:26 · answer #7 · answered by Mike N. D 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Beautiful imagery and expression! Keep writing!
2006-10-26 09:27:29 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I believe that it locks up sadness rather or solitude. good it is what I think! … To my to perish has originality and transmits solitude and sadness or also can be impotence! this pretty one! luck!
2006-10-26 09:28:39 · answer #9 · answered by Maria E 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it's very interesting, seems you've put 'powerful' meaning deep into it. if i'm just a poetic freak, ignore me :) i <3 poetry
2006-10-26 09:21:40 · answer #10 · answered by iMegan 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋