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when a person helped me, I feel touched.
so I write
"I felt so warm in my heart."
Do you have a better way to describe? the orginal paragraph is like this:
She told me that she knew I was new, so she came to look for me and see if I was doing OK. I felt so warm in my heart. At that moment, I knew goodness is everywhere.

Thank you!

2006-10-24 10:15:37 · 7 answers · asked by Sunshine3000 2 in Education & Reference Homework Help

This is for a speech, so would you tell me is there a better way to speak out my feeling of this warmth? to emphasize and touch the audience?

2006-10-24 10:33:12 · update #1

7 answers

I would say:

She courteously checked in with me, explaining that she understood how I felt being new. Her kindness spread through me like a wave and my heart burned with intensity. In that instant, I became aware of all the righteousness around me.

2006-10-24 10:44:08 · answer #1 · answered by teh_popezorz 3 · 0 1

She told me she was aware that I was new to the company, so she came to see if she could help me in any way. I felt such a sense of gratitude and warmth. It was at that moment, that I knew goodness is truly everywhere.

2006-10-24 17:25:00 · answer #2 · answered by AdamKadmon 7 · 1 0

I would take the sentence to depth as well. I would say, ""I felt a warmth DEEP WITHIN my heart, and in that very spot lay the freshly planted seed of friendship."

2006-10-24 17:28:44 · answer #3 · answered by Robster01 3 · 0 0

I felt a glowing warmth deep within my heart

2006-10-24 17:19:13 · answer #4 · answered by Mandy D 3 · 0 0

in my honest opinion, i think that the sentence is perfectly ok with the paragraph. it fits with the flow and doesn't say too much or too little. the other suggestions are good if you want to use them, but i think that the way you wrote it originally is perfectly fine.

2006-10-24 17:25:00 · answer #5 · answered by angelatheart 2 · 0 1

I would say "I felt such a warmth in my heart."

2006-10-24 17:17:46 · answer #6 · answered by april_fay21 3 · 0 0

It warmed my heart

better.

2006-10-24 17:23:52 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

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