In my town
In my town,death is everybody's friend
kills so fast no prior notice will send
each day wondering is it the end?
In my town,people finished their tears
In my town,people lost their dears
they lost hope ...they have no fears
my people replaced tears by pathetic laughter
as the scene become more bloody they laugh louder
filled with wounds but sarcastic outer
in my town,love is lost
faith is lost
humanity is lost
2006-10-24 06:48:33 · 4 answers · asked by going-to-light 3 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
My town is Baghdad
2006-10-24 07:19:29 · update #1
It's good but very dark. If that was the meaning of it then it's good. But over all I really like it a lot. Good job!
2006-10-24 06:56:50 · answer #1 · answered by tbelle26 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That's quite the town. Ever thought about moving?
2006-10-24 07:02:10 · answer #2 · answered by Chatty 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
sounds like you need to move to a new town.
2006-10-24 06:55:31 · answer #3 · answered by pnybt 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Don't get caught up in trying to make it rhyme. Give more details, as there are places where I don't understand what you are trying to say.
2006-10-24 06:53:33 · answer #4 · answered by N 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋