Give me your poison,
the poison I killed you with.
It was so harsh of me to do so,
though I did not know.
I only wanted to make you happy,
but you never wanted what I had to offer.
I was so selfish,
I never meant to hurt you with my love.
Give me the blade,
the blade I found in your room,
the blade that riped open my old wounds.
I could not bear the stress you brought.
I've been senseless all this time...
I never noticed what I was doing,
It took forever to know what I had done,
I'm sorry my love, I did not know.
Because I'm deaf,
I never hear my own guilt filled cries
as they rip through the silence,
the empty dead air is the only one who hears.
Because I'm blind,
I never see my gruesome black blood
trickle down my wrist,
and onto the bright white tile floor.
Because I can not taste,
the tears slide down my colorless cheeks,
but I never taste the salt in my mouth.
I cry because I did not know.
Because I can not taste,
I never feel the end coming.
I never suspect I'm dying,
I never feel my strength seeping out my wrists.
Because I can not smell,
I never smell death drawing near.
The stench is strong,
though I can not smell.
I've always loved you my friend.
My friend.That's all you ever were.
I'm sorry my friend, my love, my loss,
I did not know.
2006-10-24 04:37:56 · 8 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Friends
yeah a comment ur crazy
2006-10-24 04:41:36 · answer #1 · answered by sandy k 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
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2016-10-16 08:29:38 · answer #2 · answered by benavidez 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That was sooooooo good. I totally felt what you were saying. That poem touched my inner beings.........I could totally relate to everything. Never stop writing such pieces.....it was incredible.
2006-10-24 04:50:24 · answer #3 · answered by shanti804 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You've got good writing skills. submit it in a poetry contest.
2006-10-24 04:42:45 · answer #4 · answered by Renee F 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
After this poem, I'm giving up poems.
2006-10-24 04:40:07 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Thats nice!!!!
2006-10-24 04:39:26 · answer #6 · answered by Ellyn 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
too full of self pity
2006-10-24 04:46:14 · answer #7 · answered by rkilburn410 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Bravo..............applaud 4u.
2006-10-24 05:08:46 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋