can anyone help me to correct my English resume?

Question

I gonna to find a good job, here is my resume.
It may have many error.....
I'm not sure if some word is aptitude.

THANK YOU!


Skills
English:
Passed CET-6
Be able to read article quickly and smoothly, and to talk in ordinary conversation.
Computer:
National Computer Rank Examination Certificate (Grade: 2)
Skilled in use of Windows, Office , Photoshop, and most of common softwares
Has been responsible for the typesetting of ,which is a magazine published by students of Finance Department.
Expert at collecting information through the internet search
Internship
2004.7-2004.8The Ministry of Finance listed companies Guangxi Guitang Ltd.
Duties: Assist in the day-to-day work of the Finance Department

Personal evaluation
Simulated and family with transactions and trend of stock, futures, Exchange.
Regular train my trading skills through simulated exchange provided by the Multibank Web site.

Thank red260z very much!

"Simulated and family with transactions............"

means I used to simulated transactions of stoch, future, exchanges. and I very familiar with them.

can you understand me ?

Answer 1

Able to read articles quickly and smoothly. Can conduct a ordinary conversation.

Skilled in the use of Windows, Office, Photoshop and most common software.

Was responsible for typesetting "Finance Perspective" A magazine published by students within the Finance Department.

Highly skilled at obtaining information through Internet search engines.

Duties: Assist in the day to day workings of the Finance Department.

That's all I can help you with as I'm not sure what you mean by "Simulated and family with transactions............"

Answer 2

Skills should be narrowed down to 3 to 4 words. Its to long

The skills section on the resume will be in two columns with bullets.

example

Customer Service Skills
Detail - Oriented
Team Player

Answer 3

You must seek for resume samples in the internet.

I can reccomend the site
www.wikipedia.com/resume