Eyes gazing with hope
for a better tomorrow
i waited till dark
now my hearts filled with sorrow.
im just so sorry
nothing was the same
i feel so bad
like i failed, at this game.
now im sitting in my room
looking at the wall
crying for hope
for a better tomorrow.
you dont know how i feel
you never really cared
im crying with tears
cureld up with my fears
i sobbing
im not clean
heads throbbing
you dont see
im..so alone.
i know you hate me
and thats okay baby
im not here to please you
simply to share this
im not as bright as
i would like to claim
nothing you do
will make things the same.
times are changing
im just being a baby
im scared
of the future.
im not ready to
do it.
it's not done.
what do you think so far?
2006-10-23 21:44:38 · 4 answers · asked by xxxxxxxxxxxxx 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
yes im single , he left me and said he's moved on
2006-10-23 21:50:48 · update #1
I think they're great lyrics keep it up
2006-10-23 21:47:28 · answer #1 · answered by spunkybadger69 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think they're really cool, you've got a nack for writing lyrics. If you make sure you either compose or get someone you know to compose a good tune for it, I think you'd have a great song in your hands!
2006-10-23 21:59:09 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
So far I think it is great. You have a good talent keep it up.
2006-10-23 21:47:01 · answer #3 · answered by ~p♥kes~ 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋
are you single?? lol ive been there before i like it
2006-10-23 21:47:31 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋