I've come back this morning to where i first came alive
Here within this terminal where the buses arrive
I was a commuter on the 804
Worked on a computer on the 19th floor and
You came down the aisle of the bus and you sat by my side
Shoulder up to shoulder we shared that 9 o'clock ride
Oh my heart was screaming as you left your seat
Following your movements i was at your feet and
Oh down into the terminal both of us smiled
So we entered the terminal just as she smiled
Won't you leave out work for today - you ask of me then
So i phoned in sick on the way to the home of a friend
We were all alone from 10 a.m. till three
Really thought the fire had gone out of me but
You awoke the sleep of my life from gray into red
Made the weary wonder of wall street rise from the dead
Could have had the fun of my entire life
But i have to get home to the kids and the wife and
So i left for the terminal where i began
Baby no, i wouldn't have left if i'd been half a man
2006-10-23 20:41:32 · 9 answers · asked by sandy d 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
Ok, honestly, I don't quite get some parts like ' 'you awoke the sleep of my life from gray into red'. But my understanding of the rest of it is a guy who is married with a family who is smitten by the beauty of another girl but does not make a move. Which is obviously the right thing to do -_-" ...
2006-10-23 20:49:02 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 2⤋
These are good lyrics.
Depending on what music they are sung to, they might have to be edited or rearranged a bit to scan.
And they maybe could be sharpened a bit--a strong image or surprising twist of words.
But these are good.
And it's good that the guy thinks he'd be more of a man if he stayed with this woman he's just shared intimacy. It doesn't mean the guy is right--isn't this a sort of soliloquy? The lyrics are his emotions, which could be all ****** up.
2006-10-24 03:51:33 · answer #2 · answered by o41655 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Not bad...just don't like what you are writing about. The thought of having an affair...nope, not a good thing.
2006-10-24 03:45:19 · answer #3 · answered by Twisted Maggie 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Did u write that, pretty awesome.
2006-10-24 03:57:31 · answer #4 · answered by Chappers 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
love it all but the very last line.
2006-10-24 03:48:25 · answer #5 · answered by lee 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Did you write that? Well done you....
I love it...
2006-10-24 03:47:07 · answer #6 · answered by Feta Smurf 5 · 1⤊ 1⤋
interesting....
2006-10-24 03:53:01 · answer #7 · answered by kat 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i dont think something
2006-10-24 03:50:09 · answer #8 · answered by !!!$weet!!! 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
sweet !!
2006-10-24 03:48:44 · answer #9 · answered by kamsmom 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋